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November 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What a beautiful and touching story. Please continue and update it soon.
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January 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story so far. It makes me wonder what made Noah loose it with his other sub.
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November 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely amazing. I'm hooked on this story. I really enjoy the development of the characters and the progression of their relationship.
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November 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very very sweet and sexy chapter! loved it!
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November 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I could have sworn I've reviewed this story before and if so what happened to my reviews it's very baffling. Oh well, I love BDSM stories and am enjoying reading this one. I adore Noah already as a dom and little Mathias is sweet. I can't wait to find out more about Mathias' past and looking forward to reading more.
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November 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Mathias last dom was really a f..... ! Well, we know that since the first chapter... ^^'
I though Mathias was going to move in with Noah ? It would be better, no ?
Hot, hot chapter ! :))
I though Mathias was going to move in with Noah ? It would be better, no ?
Hot, hot chapter ! :))
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November 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is really a great story so far!!!! I want to read more of this!!!!!
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November 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think this story has good potential, but I think it may be missing some inner monologue or character feelings maybe. I'm not getting a real good feeling about why the characters do what they do
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November 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for the update. I'm enjoying reading this one and was very happy to see a new chapter up tonight. Poor Mathias. I hope there's an eventual confrontation between Noah and Mat's old Dom so Noah can kick his ass properly :-)
Thanks again
lunamist
Thanks again
lunamist
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November 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think you have a very promising start and I would love to see more! :)