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person Anon
schedule November 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The last comment was from me. Sry I forgot to log in. ^^
person Nuki
schedule November 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sry again. I'm to stupid for this. ._. *hides in a corner*
schedule November 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
God, Devon is so sexy. I am loving this story more and more each time you update.
person Nuki
schedule November 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story. I'm curious what's going to happen next.
Keep up the good work.
person MoMo
schedule November 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*points above* Name dropped! Yay! Haha I made an account just so I could attempt to write! Ahem, back to your story. I will try to review each chapter but I'm busy with nursing school so that probably will not happen. I love the development here! She's an art student, whose very very innocent and gets corrupted slowly by the big bad wolf! Spoilers-mainly my musings to SweetSurrender:I liked how you had her feeling like he used her, only to come to find him asleep in her spot! He does remind me of a wolf, very predatory actions/behaviors and Cath is definately his little sheep! I find myself drawn to his backstory? I know I'll have to wait and see, but I'm curious if Devon and Valerie are related? Exlovers? Etc. lovely update by the way! Steamy as always! Your sex scenes are fantastic and very classy the way you write them, unlike some stories where I feel akward reading it. Deeply envested in your work, my dear! I squealed when I logged on and saw you updated so fast! Haha. Until next time!
person MoMo
schedule November 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your writing style. I've actually read all of your other stories I'm just a bad fan, I haven't reviewed until now. I'm sorry!! You are very talented with your words and describe with elegant details, it makes reading your stories all the better because I feel like I'm there with them. I am anxiously awaiting your next update for this and your other story! Never quit writing! You have actually enspired me to try my hand at writing! I shall try to review more often!
person ana maria
schedule November 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
excelente, espero muy pronto nuevos capitulos, ana maria