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November 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like love that she is so unsurea afraid or may I say scared of this realationship with Devon what only could be understandable. While Devon is so sure of his attraction towards her and his confidance that brings to diffrent emotions to her. Love to see how this end up and what the road will be before they are sat into a comfortable relationship with each other. Not to mention that I really like the side characters and that they do not lack on character. Keep it up with these top rate stories.
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November 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice update. I like the charakter development.
Waiting for the next chapter.
Waiting for the next chapter.
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November 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is my first BDSM story and I have to say I was not disappointed! Love this story!
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November 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is AMAZING! I wanted to go to a club after the first chapter...irrationally, of course. Too much to hope for. This is probably why I was craving testosterone all day too D:< You evil little- just kidding ;P I am crazily craving dark, dangerous eyes and dominance MORE than usual, which might I add, is a LOT. Valerie is jealous...this story makes me re-think being more like Valerie and being inspired by Catherine, although the idea of appearing submissive just leaves a bitter taste in my mouth.
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November 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Steamingly hot hehe. Did not really saw this one comming. Really like that he do not use her only for the obvious. Can't wait for more and what this little devil has planned. Note that I really like your music choices. Both charters are amazing and am sure I will be suprised how they will devolep trough the story out. Keep up coming with these mad talented writing skills.
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November 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm hooked.
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November 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ahora el muestra lo que realmente quiere con ella, despues de ser sometida que va a pasar, el tendra consideracion ono, espero con muchisima ansiedad nuevos capitulos muy pronto, ana maria
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November 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Whaa love it. Like the character of Devon. Did not expect the stay over in chapther 2. I like his dark side and that he does not seem to leave. Like charcter of chaterine also. Am only curious what sort of fears she have. Will she submit of run?? you make my head run, Love to see more of this story. Not to mention Velantina and her two friends also there charcter are nice side persons. Can't wait what you have in store for us.
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November 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! I love it soo much! You write Bdsm so beautifully. You truly have a gift with words, my dear! I love the development here; taking his time to devour his sheep, her crying out because of instinct and getting "punished". I do hope their relationship holds well. A good sub/dom relationship so far! Dev is definetly beyond sexy, I want one! I look forward to your writing all week! Good update. Can't wait for more! Oh, I read your other story you have going on aswell, love it! Need to review that one too!
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November 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just wow. I love your story more and more!
I would write more but I'm still speechless. Have to cool down a little. ^^
I would write more but I'm still speechless. Have to cool down a little. ^^