rate_review Reviews

this is just so freaking fantastic. i love these characters. somehow i missed the update before this one...!!!! oh my lord Flicker! i love how different each character is. and how original!!! And i just dont know what any one will do... i mean, i formed my opinions about alistair's personality in the first chapter based on what mikey was saying... and then to have it all turned around and shaken up as i read more from alistair's mind, i realise that i cant make the same assumptions i do when i read the usual stuff on here (dont get me wrong, i am not bagging the delicious stories on this site lol) because i am clearly in the hands of someone who can craft characters that have more then two dimensions!!! you are so crafty lol. so exciting. so fascinating. mikey! alistair! flicker! wahhhhh... and what is going to happen next?
as for the news about aure... i am freaking out for the little guy!!!! your news does not bode well for his safety...
seriously. i love your writing. i am yours to do with what you will.

Pretty awesome! I'm a sucker for potential and Alistair has a lot of it. I like the way you write him. Now I'm just curious as to how his new job will go. And the haircut...I may have just gotten to know Alistair but to me the rats nest is like a character trait. A symbol of the beginnings of change perhaps? And what will Mikey think of all this?? I'm curious to see what happens next!

I have to say, you are a talented writer. I enjoy your stories.

The last part about cutting his hair made me laugh a bit because of how much he really doesn't care XD. I am glad he is going to hustle for money in a positive way. Cheers

i am floored by this. it is not what i expect to read on this site. i love it. the characters are so unpredictable and so compelling. i really hope that your stories don't get abandoned like so many good ones do...
would break my heart.
i really have no clue what is going to happen next or why. i love that. i love you!

wow. same kind of way of telling a story... but a freakingly amazingly different result. someone has talent lol...
you are great at getting inside the head of your characters. and wow... the guy with the candle.. and alistair... yeah, everyone. i am really enjoying this story already. i cant wait to see where ti is going.

I like this story its dark, real, and beautiful. You have a unique vision in writing style, character building, and story telling. Can't wait for the next chapter.