rate_review Reviews

ARGH!!!!! Where is the rest of this?? This is such a great story and I can't wait until you update! I love your characters and their personalities. I especially love the hot, heated moments between Barik and Nia- mainly because you write them so well. You're tasteful, but the scenes are still sexy and erotic, which is a hard balance to achieve.

I don't know how old this story is, this stupid site doesn't show the date when a chapter is published, but I hope you keep working on it and didn't give up. It has so much going for it. Of course there's typos and grammatical errors, but that can always be fixed. Just have someone proof read your work before you post :).

Oh. My only gripe was the chapter Nia found Adi. Questions/comments: What exactly is a dem? And, I felt like Nia's personality faltered in that chapter. She's usually a tough woman, like when she found Barik in her room, but when surrounded by 6 men she acted clueless. I mean she said "Hello"...seriously?? Not "What are you doing here?" or "Is there a problem, gentleman?" Or something? It was strange to read that. Plus, why did she even leave the castle?? What was the point of that? Again, just seemed a little odd, but other than that I love the story. I have it saved to my Favorites and I will keep checking in to see if there's any new updates. If not here, make a blog or something and keep writing! :)

Keep writing, stay inspired! Your fans are waiting :).

Thank you for transporting me to a new universe. I am thoroughly enjoying losing myself in your story. I agree a beta would be helpful but the story is easy enough to read without the extra set of eyes.
Your storyline, universe, characters and smattering of smut have me hooked. Please keep writing!

I'm very happy to see more updates to this story :D ! I was afraid this story was abandoned like so many other good stories out there.

Great story! I actually like this chapter, can't tell why you didn't...

Hey so *poke poke* word around town is that you need a beta and all I have to say is I volunteer as tribute :) if you would like me to my email is reinababyj@outlook.com

I'm really looking forward to the rest of this story. Besides a few grammar mistakes it is well written.
Sci-fi genre fics were never of any interest to me until I read Dara Joy's Knight of a Trillion Stars and the rest of that Matrix series. I was pleasantly surprised that romance and sci-fi could be mixed so beautifully together.

Anyway, I like how you don't go too much into specifics of the origin of planets or species or whatever else that can get tedious when some authors spend too much time explaining the setting of place. You just stick to the main characters story and her current surroundings and focus on what is happening to her.

I love this story so far and I not that into hetero stories. but keep the good work. You have me on the edge of my seat.

I actually released a "WHAT THE HELL, MAN?!" when I finished reading chapter two and I realized that there isn't another chapter. LOL!

so far i like it, you already have a really good view of the characters involved even though we only get glimpses of them. they seem in depth and to have a very interesting history and background and I like that. The setting really does seem interesting and I am curious to find out more. I do understand the fact that you have the plot set out but not the chapter to chapter events. I tend to do the same thing with my chapters and that's alright just keep an eye on consistancy and keeping that main plot line evident through out the story. doesn't have to be anything major just little hits. Otherwise I'm enjoying the story a lot keep it up and i hope you can update soon.

Ive only just discovered your fic, but im really loving where its heading to 8D
Cant wait for the next chapter :)