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February 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Still no update?????? T_T Why????? T_T
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July 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I hope you will complete it.
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February 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm intrigued. The plot seems well thought out and the writing flows smoothly. I'll keep reading.
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February 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter! The chemistry between them is fabulous and I think this little girl Salen is just so cute.
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January 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! I'm loving this universe and can hardly wait for the next chapter but sadly it's been awhile :( ....I hope you haven't abandoned this great story!
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November 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
First time in quite a long while I've come across an original fic that I've enjoyed quite so much! Your characters and story are so great and I'm really enjoying this world you've been carving out. I certainly hope you write more soon :)
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July 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
omg!!! This story is ah-mazing. I love that Nia is not not weak minded. I adore her spirit. I was in shock when I didn't see another chapter. story is too good not to finish.
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June 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!! T_T
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June 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
SWEET!!! You updated the story!! =D
And thanks for answering my questions lol. I honestly thought the way she acted, even if to be polite was too...meek, given the situation. She didn't have to hurt anyone, but she accepted extremely gullible. Updating Ch 7 was awesome, and she made a great point in regards to Barik keeping things from her. I really love her independence and I guess that's why when she doesn't show it or her mental strength her character seems odd because I know that's a part of her. Keep up the great work! And, if you need someone to help you with edits, I can. As far as typos I mean. There's usually just small mistakes. But thanks for the update! :)
And thanks for answering my questions lol. I honestly thought the way she acted, even if to be polite was too...meek, given the situation. She didn't have to hurt anyone, but she accepted extremely gullible. Updating Ch 7 was awesome, and she made a great point in regards to Barik keeping things from her. I really love her independence and I guess that's why when she doesn't show it or her mental strength her character seems odd because I know that's a part of her. Keep up the great work! And, if you need someone to help you with edits, I can. As far as typos I mean. There's usually just small mistakes. But thanks for the update! :)
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June 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
SWEET!!! You updated the story!! =D
And thanks for answering my questions lol. I honestly thought the way she acted, even if to be polite was too...meek, given the situation. She didn't have to hurt anyone, but she acted extremely gullible. Updating Ch 7 was awesome, and she made a great point in regards to Barik keeping things from her. I really love her independence and I guess that's why when she doesn't show it or her mental strength her character seems odd because I know that's a part of her. Keep up the great work! And, if you need someone to help you with edits, I can. As far as typos I mean. There's usually just small mistakes. But thanks for the update! :)
And thanks for answering my questions lol. I honestly thought the way she acted, even if to be polite was too...meek, given the situation. She didn't have to hurt anyone, but she acted extremely gullible. Updating Ch 7 was awesome, and she made a great point in regards to Barik keeping things from her. I really love her independence and I guess that's why when she doesn't show it or her mental strength her character seems odd because I know that's a part of her. Keep up the great work! And, if you need someone to help you with edits, I can. As far as typos I mean. There's usually just small mistakes. But thanks for the update! :)