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for Aure

by Dean_Wax

person nine
schedule October 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
so... judging by the codes you put on this story little Aure is not going to live happily ever after at his next abode... i am freaking out for him actually. It is all very mysterious, the way the butler seemed to be destroying all evidence of Aure's existence... and who are these new men? and why was Aure at the old man's house? i am absolutely caught up in this story. thank you for the speedy update.
am absolutely looking forward to finding out what happens next. Aure's personality and narration of the story is very interesting, very appealing, but also so stilted and repressed and natural and real-feeling... i dont know... i dont have the right words today to express it but i love this story.
person Raven
schedule October 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
what a wonerful story so many questions on how and the why of the way everything is coming together. look forward to more soon
person nine
schedule October 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this is fascinating. seriously. the way it is told has me at the edge of my seat. i love little aure. thank god he killed that awful old guy at the end of chapter 2... please tell me there will be more to this story. he is only 11 but he has to deal with all of that... i just want the cook to make a giant chocolate cake and let little aure devour it all... and then we all need to give him lots of hugs lol. wahhh this story has me in its grip. you have made me care to much about aure to end the story... please update again...
person Alleya
schedule October 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
If this was any more darker, I would marry you. Seriously I love the tone and the style of this story. I cant' wait to see what happens next.
schedule October 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm getting more and more fond of Aure and his quirky manners with each chapter. Good riddance to the old man. Can't wait to see what's coming next and who these new guys are. Definitely looking forward to more :)
person Snow
schedule October 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is exquisitely written and the build up is amazing. My own heart was pounding near the end! I'm very curious about what will come next!
person Snow
schedule October 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. I definitely approve of this chapter! I wonder what will happen to poor Aure next! The butler surely won't be happy with his master's death! Will he run away or will he stay and let the butler do with him what he surely will?!