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April 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
okay...aure is kind of creepy now XD
that was so weird. i like the mystery about where Aure came from and why his photograph was being burned. glad we got a bit of info about that.
This part confused me:" “Yes,” I reply, and I realise only after I have said it just how wistful I sound. I am filled with a warmth I have no felt before and I am not entirely sure why. I think it might be happiness, though if it is it is a brand I have not felt before. There must be another word that is more accurate. I have never felt this affirmed about my own existence before."
I'm gonna just guess he enjoys dissection? Or maybe he feels like he now has a role, that he thinks he's going to become part of the cleaners?
anyway glad the gore wasn't too detailed lol. thanks for the update!
that was so weird. i like the mystery about where Aure came from and why his photograph was being burned. glad we got a bit of info about that.
This part confused me:" “Yes,” I reply, and I realise only after I have said it just how wistful I sound. I am filled with a warmth I have no felt before and I am not entirely sure why. I think it might be happiness, though if it is it is a brand I have not felt before. There must be another word that is more accurate. I have never felt this affirmed about my own existence before."
I'm gonna just guess he enjoys dissection? Or maybe he feels like he now has a role, that he thinks he's going to become part of the cleaners?
anyway glad the gore wasn't too detailed lol. thanks for the update!
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April 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@ nine: my guess is that making him all dainty through ballet is a good way of making him seem delicate and harmless to people. then WHAM he pulls out a gun and gets them when they least expect it. lol. at least, that's what i think could happen...
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March 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved the new chapter! Aure is such an awesome character
Even though not much happened it was still entertaining reading about his thoughts
He acts like an adult but its still very innocent and childlike
Even though not much happened it was still entertaining reading about his thoughts
He acts like an adult but its still very innocent and childlike
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March 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i love aure, hope for an happy end
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March 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I am hooked.
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March 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
freaking amazing as per usual.
i have a request. can this story last forever please?
i thought the chapter before this was the last and i was still reeling form such an ending... and then to find that it is continuing! dreamy!
i am a little scared about just how much i love this story. It is so consistently thrilling and original. The characters are so skilfully written!
and now that i know the story goes on (my heart beats even faster then before at the thought! and i have just finished reading the new chapter so it was beating pretty damn fast!!) can we please meet cale again?
and Red!! i think i am going to like him! his taste in mob boss fashion seems very right... and the hair of course lol swoon
gosh i just love being in Aure's head. i love! how methodical he is about everything how deeply he considers every detail before he takes an action.
I really enjoy being this into a story!! i really can not wait to see how and what things happen next!!
thank you!!!
your creepily obsessed and fawning admirer! but seriously... i love you!!
i have a request. can this story last forever please?
i thought the chapter before this was the last and i was still reeling form such an ending... and then to find that it is continuing! dreamy!
i am a little scared about just how much i love this story. It is so consistently thrilling and original. The characters are so skilfully written!
and now that i know the story goes on (my heart beats even faster then before at the thought! and i have just finished reading the new chapter so it was beating pretty damn fast!!) can we please meet cale again?
and Red!! i think i am going to like him! his taste in mob boss fashion seems very right... and the hair of course lol swoon
gosh i just love being in Aure's head. i love! how methodical he is about everything how deeply he considers every detail before he takes an action.
I really enjoy being this into a story!! i really can not wait to see how and what things happen next!!
thank you!!!
your creepily obsessed and fawning admirer! but seriously... i love you!!
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March 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Freaking Hell. That was amazing! Forgive me for my absence, I havent had internet for so long!
That was so... gah! awful but in the most perfect way! Is that how it ends?? but there are still so many unanswered questions! but perhaps it is best left hanging like that... oh Aure!! I just still dont fully understand Mattias' character. I LOVE what happened to Landon. I Love your description of the evidence at the bottom of the stairs, the single shoe print etc... your writing and the way you leave out so much detail but put in certain details has such an eerie effect I think. I really love it and it just gives this whole creepy but wonderful story such edge!!
I am just fascinated by Aure!! "I will need collecting." god that line just KILLED me. Aure is so freaky! but he is also such a product of his circumstances!
Yet I still cant make out mattias at all. why would he commit suicide like that? who is this organisation/group of people who were meant to help him?
what was the true nature of landon and mattias' relationship?
I doubt that I will forget this story very easily.
That was so... gah! awful but in the most perfect way! Is that how it ends?? but there are still so many unanswered questions! but perhaps it is best left hanging like that... oh Aure!! I just still dont fully understand Mattias' character. I LOVE what happened to Landon. I Love your description of the evidence at the bottom of the stairs, the single shoe print etc... your writing and the way you leave out so much detail but put in certain details has such an eerie effect I think. I really love it and it just gives this whole creepy but wonderful story such edge!!
I am just fascinated by Aure!! "I will need collecting." god that line just KILLED me. Aure is so freaky! but he is also such a product of his circumstances!
Yet I still cant make out mattias at all. why would he commit suicide like that? who is this organisation/group of people who were meant to help him?
what was the true nature of landon and mattias' relationship?
I doubt that I will forget this story very easily.
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March 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Fascinating, weird, beautiful and somehow suspended in time, such a strange and twisted story and so well written. I've been reading from the start and it's about time I said how much I love this.
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February 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is truly a unqie story... I'm wondering the time frame though... for a few minutes is seems to be in the late 1800's to the early 1900's I'm a little confused on just this other wise I will continue to read and comment when I can.
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February 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this plot and this character development are both some of the most fascinating things i have ever read.
i love how aure is going mad at the moment. i just love this. i always want more and more but i think it is probably better in small doses otherwise i might die from an overload of gushing love.
from your insanely raving reviewer who sends you lots of love but not in a creepy way
i love how aure is going mad at the moment. i just love this. i always want more and more but i think it is probably better in small doses otherwise i might die from an overload of gushing love.
from your insanely raving reviewer who sends you lots of love but not in a creepy way