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was this how Norman Bates started out really? Cause DAMN he's got the creepy "WENSDAY ADAM" thing down to a science! I'm wonder who the doctor is and is he going to start wearing pants? I love the "slang" that's used by all in this story it's almost like an old timey gangster movie only add bates motel que in the fashion police and we're good to go and throw in some Sopranos to boot. LOVE IT! read ya laters!

Its a very intriguing story. Creepy and on the dark side. I am enjoying it very much and can't wait to see where it ends. Aure seems to me that he borders on being a mad genius tossed in with a good dose of psychotic stoicism. The rape definitely pushed him over the edge, even though he was headed in that direction. Rigo and Theirry are exciting new characters that I want to know more about. So Hope that you keep going.

Hey Dean, Jay here.

I just got finished with Chapter 7. I am not yet sure how I feel about your story. I feel very bad for Aure, and I do, yet don't as well, want to find out what else the poor child has to go through. Also, I looked up ballet dancers feet on google images... NASTY LOOKING for sure! Poor Aure.

This isn't what I normally read. It's so... I don't know. I want to say it's morbid, but it's really not. It's just sad. Sad in a very deep way. I feel like my own life is being mutilated and ripped to shreds while reading this, and I don't know how I feel about that.

It's a VERY WELL WRITTEN story, with almost no mistakes. The story line is riveting, and the characters are so believable. So, I'll leave this review and continue on to chapter 8.

<3 Jay

Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!

Oooh, I really enjoy how this is starting to turn out. Very well done.

Aure just dodged a bullet and all he can think about is meeting a doctor XD That is so funny! I love it!

brilliant of course. i love the strange road aure is on. it feels like he has all along been on a projection toward some kind of terrible end. terrible for who? i wouldnt dare guess. but i feel like the reader is in a dark tunnel, heading toward the light at the end, everything, the details, the other characters, the dialogue is kind of details in the darkness that we are travelling through. that sounds weird. but i cant explain it. i try though lolol. you are brilliant at characters!!!!!!!!!!!! they are immediately interesting yet we never know much about them. it is just a few lines and yet they already feel familiar.

I love how twisted this story has become. I'm looking forward to the next part.

if i am honest, the first two words that appear in my head when i see that you have updated are "fuck! yes!". because obviously i lack your eloquence. another plot twist! i LOVE it! and this line chilled me appropriately "I could never have dreamed of such an opportunity as this." gosh i love Aure!! i still dont get why aure was sent to live with the freaky old man... or why he was then on-sold to the author and the pedo... was the family always going to give him this job? or are they making use of him because he is kind of spare at the moment and they can tell he has the personality for it? if they were aways going to give him this kind of job then how could they have known/ensured that his personality would become so well suited for such tasks? i love this! aure is as cryptic but fascinating as ever! a small silly part of me is hoping for a happy ending but... yeah...
oh! and lol... is ballet training essential for mafia hit man/body disposal people? is that why aure had to learn ballet? does that mean all the big beefy guys i see in mafia movies all can do amazing ballet?

There is something in the cool, detached and elegant way you write that even makes sawing up a corpse sound poetical. Otherwise: Confused! Explain! Eagerly awaiting the next update!