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for THE SPARK

by luckyasablackcat

person FromAfar
schedule November 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I liked the story; the main character's background is slowly revealing, she's definitely interesting and probably very talented or powerful; you placed her so that she could see from inside the inner workings of the system that had destroyed her world; thus she can understand how to survive and pay back for everything they had taken away from her.
Will there be some explanation of how 'blinking' curse or charm works?

Good luck with your writing!

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