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Man that was so HAWT XD! But I still feel terrible about the situation Randy is in. But Randy has no one to blame but himself in this hot, sexy mess. And poor Felix doesn't have a clue about any of this :( .

Each chapter i read i realise again how freaking wonderful this story is. it has nothing to detract from it. the writing is flawless and effective. the character development is intriguing, competent and makes me fall a little more in love with them with each update. the descriptions of randy's outfits are not annoying in the slightest and i actually look forward to seeing what he is wearing.
I LOVE Preston right now... although if i was Randy i wouldn't trust him either. just like a child, he might discard Randy at any moment once the whim passes.
gosh i love Randy. I really identify with him. strangely.
and the sex! this is some delicious material you are providing! and preston was so surprisingly so extremely sweet. i loved it.
and i lol'd when he pulled the lubricant from beneath the couch... and now i want to know where else he has lube stashed through out the house.
I can not wait for more.
this is the kind of story that i want to just keep on reading. i really dont want it to end... ever
thank you so much for sharing it!

I kind of want to see Preston's pov to see how he came to terms with liking Randy in the first place.

Among other things.

I don't know who to root for. I seriously hate love triangles and didn't expect to be throw in a loop like this. I am horribly confused at this all.

If I double or triple review delete the copies. For some reason aff.net isn't working right.

FINALLY found this again. God I need to bookmark stuff.

This chapter makes me think that a love triangle might form :/ OI I thought it would be a simple story after all.

Still hope you continue this.

Curious on the love triangle and if Randy is finally going to tell Felix about that.

Its almost 3am that I'm typing this so if I got anything mixed up like names or random errors let me know. I still really enjoy this story since its a twist and one of the more creative ones.

hey I wanted to tell you that I've really been enjoying reading this story! I should've reviewed before tho :-/ so sorry about that but this definitely deserves a shout out. I really think this is very unique in all aspects--the chracters, the plot, everything and I have no idea where you are going to go with it. And I like it! Plus I think Randy has such realism to him and makes his mistakes that makes him so real, vulnerable yet strong. I think we can definitely judge his actions/not approve of some of his choices but not him which makes him a strikingly likeable character. It's also interesting that I think you mentioned Randi just likes to dress feminine but not actually undergo gender reassignment surgery (if I remember correctly) which also throws another layer to the story. It's really refreshing to read something like this and like it so much. Plus your writing is great--fluid, descriptive, and impactful. Great job! :D

Randy, Randy, Randy - you gotta fess up. The longer Randy waits, the harder it will be. He should have told Felix from the get-go when their relationship was new.

I'm actually surprised Preston didn't chase after Randy when he had the opportunity to.

As always, another awesome chapter - keep 'em coming! lol :)

Ah oh looks like Preston is starting to get a little antsy in the pants! And also for a little bit for some reason I thought Felix was actually a girl. Don't ask me why but that's just what I thought, but the blowjob help clear that up quite a bit so NO Felix is definitely a guy lol!

I love this. I love Randy. Is Randy a girls name in America (where i assume you are from...) it isnt really a common name in Australia (because we use it interchangeably with the word horny lol) but I have only ever heard it with guys so when I first started reading this i was a little confused as to why no one was asking why he has a boys name... as if that matters anyway... I am absolutely caught up in this story... I have an awful yaoi mind so a part of me is waiting for Preston to turn out to be the true love... at the very least i am waiting for him to coerce lots of sex... i have to say i was relieved when Randy ran away because i dont want him to be used... i must be growing up lol...
and Felix is so gorgeous... i am going to cry if he rejects randy i am so scared and nervous for her/him... what is the correct gender to refer to Randy?
i LOVE you for updating.

and it was so sad about randy's family... made me love him even more. just want to hug him.

i am KICKING myself for passing this one over so many times now... it is fantastic and i am in love with randy! and there is so much going on with the high school stuff and the teacher and then preston and now musician guy! I love Randy. I love his personality. i love how polite he is and how sweet. i kind of like preston too... and i hope he is more than what he seems to be. wow the teacher was awful! poor baby randy! to walk into that! i just want our boy to be happy forever.
thank you for sharing. i am so eager for more.