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for Between The Two

by timecap_cell

person asdf
schedule January 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i like how he ended up with the unexpected one (felix, not preston). lol

in these stories usually the main character ends up with the more hunky/aggressively stupid yet likeable one, not the wimpy-er one.
schedule January 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't think it is a very good end. I just feel like it isn't finished yet. Felix still has a lot to deal with since he has never been with a guy before. I think that there is still more to it. I do like the story I just feel like it isn't over yet. Also I think that Randy would still have a lot to go through since it was just his first day explaining himself. Just something to think about.
Allie
person El
schedule January 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey,

I would love to see Felix's parent's face when they realize he is a boy. As well, like Allie said, there is still so much that needs to be covered. Will there be a sequel?

I really loved this story. I hope there will be.

El
person Anon
schedule January 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awww this was so sweet, just how I needed to end my night. Great job and wonderful idea!
person Talltree-san
schedule January 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wish I could read this song that Felix wrote for Randy. It was obvious that Felix was still very much thinking about Randy when he wrote this song of his :) . Awesome story :D !
person animekid
schedule January 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA It's over? I mean it was a GREAT story and a wonderful last chapter but man I wanted to see more with Randy and Felix and how they deal with the 'reveal,' and everything! With some more mushy fluff!

Oh well.....still I loved this story! I hate to see it done and over with but it was a good ride above all.
person Talltree-san
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yes, you go Randy! IT IS TIME TO BE FREE! Still bummed out about Felix, and there is still that pesky, sexy Preston situation as well.
person Mako
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!! Please update soon!!
person Nine
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
!!!!!!!wow!!!!!!! freaking out of Randy!! and not his beautiful hair!! i cant wait for the next chapter!! i can not wait for preston's reaction to seeing randy in guy clothes!! i love this!!
schedule January 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Damnit Timecap! Just when I wanted to see what Randy looked like you end the chapter! lol

Is he trying to morph back into a boy? He would probably make a really pretty boy or maybe he'd look androgynous. And yeah, maybe Felix isn't all caught up in that whole I-was-dating-a-guy thing and maybe he doesn't really care about that.

As usual Timecap, you always leave me wanting more. :)