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person MoMo
schedule November 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Where can I go to meet these men you create? Hmm? Lovely story. I love both characters more and more. It's funny how they are both running from their pasts but found one another. Sexy lumberjack/lawyer meets bartender and sparks fly! I find I'm drawn in to wanting to know their backgrounds, why Craig is truly not a lawyer anymore etc. the scene where Craig is trying to calm himself down by listing new amendments to laws was hilarious. You do such a wonderful job of staying true to your characters and relating small things like that scene, back to who they are. Looking forward to more, darling!
person littlemiss76
schedule October 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet.
schedule October 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is great, love the detail, love the characters! Was so pulling for them to get together. Waiting for more!
person Corinne Blackwell
schedule October 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! A few spelling errors here and there, but a great story overall. Is there going to be a continuing chapter? If there is, I'm very interested and await with bated breath yntil you update! :)
person Jen
schedule October 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Your new story seems pretty good. Can't wait for the next chap!