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October 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love it! can not freaking wait for the next one.
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October 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
lol ! Max is really a b**** with Reilly ! He likes to torture him !
I hope for more Lucien/Reilly in the next chapter !?
Thanks for the long chapter...
:)
I hope for more Lucien/Reilly in the next chapter !?
Thanks for the long chapter...
:)
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October 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
teheheeeee... i think i am going to like this story. You have my attention! I like his character (the guy who will be the companion), I also like Lucient (the only name i remember sorry... by the second or third chapter i can usually start to use characters' actual names in reviews...) I like the society, at least what you have revealed so far. I like how you haven't just dumped a ton of info on us but are making us wait and whine for more lol
I also love the friend (michael?? or is that his vampire? the friend always embarassing the main guy - once again, apologies over the lack of name lol)...
I am really looking forward to seeing where this is going.
nice writing, nice characters, nice plot... you have me! i am yours! (be gentle lol)
I also love the friend (michael?? or is that his vampire? the friend always embarassing the main guy - once again, apologies over the lack of name lol)...
I am really looking forward to seeing where this is going.
nice writing, nice characters, nice plot... you have me! i am yours! (be gentle lol)
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October 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good start ! I like it so far...
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October 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, great start. You've really done a fantastic job of building Reilly's character and giving us a look at your new society. Can't wait to see more.
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October 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
awww this sounds so charming! :D I cannot wait to read more!