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November 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm as confused as Yem, but can't wait to read the next chapter. :)
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November 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow what a crackpot mother Yem has. What in the world is she schemibg, if her whole goal is to use her son to control a queen (or in this case I guess it'd be a que)? Dundundun Can't wait to see what happens next.
Oh and what a palace, that servants protect their queen and probably the other subjects that live there.
Oh and what a palace, that servants protect their queen and probably the other subjects that live there.
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November 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What is Yem's mother thinking? She sounds crazy. I'm glad that Telm is not taking out his anger on Yem for forcing them into a bond. Looking forward to reading more.
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November 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yem- no idea what's going on around him or even what's happening inside him. And what a crazy family. Telm is such a fiesty character. haha i can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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November 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome but sooo short lol can't wait for more :)
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November 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I should have known better to let Facebook and your Stories List tempt me. I try to wait until school is over or for a relatively long holiday, but as usual I'm unable to resist your worlds. *happy sigh* *grin* Ah well. I'm sunk in deep now. *laughing* Going to be on Facebook like a fiend, checking to see when this is updated. It's a fantastic story so far and I am ecstatic about seeing everyone from Broken Innocence again.
Thanks for sharing!!
Thanks for sharing!!
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November 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think I'm going to have trouble telling all the children apart because it sounds like there's a whole herd of them. Haha
I'm glad that Yem's in the dark about everything, which also gives us readers an opportunity to learn more about Queens and all the crazy shenanigans going on.
I'm glad that Yem's in the dark about everything, which also gives us readers an opportunity to learn more about Queens and all the crazy shenanigans going on.
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October 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yem is such a nice boy. Shame he comes from a wack ass momma. Hopefully, his new family shows him how a real family works.
Also, I've read all your other stories and it cracked me up to imagine Leo getting overtaken by Yem. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter. Hope to see it soon and good luck!
Also, I've read all your other stories and it cracked me up to imagine Leo getting overtaken by Yem. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter. Hope to see it soon and good luck!
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October 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting world and characters. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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October 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yes derm you should be angry it all your fault, since he let them onto his land then didn't keep an eye on thngs tisk tisk