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*laughing too hard to give a proper review*

Thanks so much for sharing!

Chapter 11. BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! I'm so looking forward to what will happen!

Hah Yem squabbles with Terrin yet is almost protective of her when the blacksmith's son comes around. Poor Terrin, my heart hurts for her. I hope her heart isn't going to be broken. :)

Chapter 10. Woot! Hahahah~ Cracking skulls. I can definitely see Yem doing some blood letting on Telm in the pleasurable way. Though I'm not sure if that will every happen in Rising.

I was very happy to see you posted more chapters. Sorry to read your word processor died. I had been looking for new chapters on this story for a while... glad to see you were just caught up with life and had not lost interest in writing this story.

I have to say I love Yem and all of his cluelessness. He makes an interesting way for you to explain cerntain thing about the world which is refreshing. It allows the readers to learn about the world at the same time as Yem.

Oh Yem, sometimes I wonder where your brain is. Haha How did he make commoners rise? And is the point to come to the aid of the warrior and whatever he's defending?

Finally have time to review the chapters I read last week. *grin* I love all the intrigue that's going on with Yem's mom. I didn't even think in that direction. At all. *laughing* I love the interaction between Yem and Teln and can't wait to see them together more. Especially since I know Telm is going to be more than a handful. I do wonder if the way he was raised and the way he wasn't taught to be a warrior, makes him somewhat of a new breed. Almost like a Que in a sense, but not. Mostly because he has a sense of who he could and could not beat, and some of those people are really strong.

I'm still laughing about the stab first and ask questions later comment. Still. I did like how the meething in the throne room went, and would like to see more with Mal and Yem together... without them beating up on each other alot.

Love how everyone is so protective of Terrin. Always love how accepting Yem is, because of how the others react, like they expect him to be disgusted or seomthing else negative. I also love the small lesson that Yem got from Pyanna. He's getting a bit of worded history of his rank. Though it was interupted by Telm's older brother. I wonder if Yem is going to let him win, or if Rold is going to beat him soundly. Now I wonder if Yem has ever been in an actual fight. Hmm.

Anyways! As always, Thanks for sharing!

Oh boy now you're in for it Yem. Try not to get beaten too much by Telm's brother. Haha Gosh these families are so complicated. Could we get a family tree?

Chapter 8. LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL! Poor Yem. I can't wait for chapter 9.

Wow, this is a very interesting story. I will definitely have to read your others to fully grasp all the stories titles and meanings. I think I am overwhelmed with all of them at this moment to get them all straight lol. Thank you for the story.