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for Down In Flames

by Dizdayn

person asdf
schedule November 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the updates :D
person :)
schedule November 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am really liking this story!!!! I will definitely be watching for updates :)
person Quill
schedule October 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Because of Liam's hesitation, I find myself little afraid of what Skype will do to find Pheonix!!! Wonderful, yet again. Only one typo to point out: just before they start talking about Liam's mom (When Wes is in the Saloon) you typed Phee instead of Liam.
schedule October 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh this fic is so wonderful! I can't wait for the next chapter! I can't help but imagine all the delightful things Liam will do once he finds Phoenix. Poor Poor Phoenix. He's gonna have one heck of a time being seduced by Liam! It'll be so much fun to read! Also really enjoyed Skype's character. She is so strong and powerful, that not even the emperor could push her around. I like that. Anyways thanks for the great chapter! I can't wait for the next one!
person addiena saffir
schedule October 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Holy Lady, Goddess and Ancestors! I need more chapters please.
person asdf
schedule October 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OoooOoo...that's nice. i've been here really long too and i always get the urge to write something, but i never actually do it lol
wow 2001 is like, over 10 years ago. that's a really long time!
person asdf
schedule October 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
looooooove it!
person adf
schedule October 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Liam would make a great antagonist...like, the evil person in the story who gets the mediocre ending. heh heh
person J42
schedule October 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Greta start. looking forward to more :)
person Quill
schedule October 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Riveted. My eyes were riveted to the screen. I got to the bottom of the page and almost shed a tear. There was no "Next Chapter" button. I fell in love with this chapter and I am more than merely curious to see what you have planned for Pheonix/Liam next! Ta ta!