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June 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Xoxo Robin
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May 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi nice story but you might want to add a 'consent issues' or something warning to this - 'Deals' got a shade too close to rape for me and leaving it without a warning might imply that if someone's attracted to you consent doesn't matter, which I'm guessing you don't believe.
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May 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Trojen twister be damned! I want what he's having! bring it on! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!! WOW this world rocks! I'm so happy for Wes as well as Dash thank you for letting them find one another! if you don't mind could we have some more please when you get the chance! This story is banging! read ya laters! I need to rest now and get a sandwich hoo boy! I'm wiped!
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May 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Just read straight through, looking forward to the next chapter^^
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May 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Just read the first page and Oh My! I love it already I'm going to continue reading but I just wanted to say Thank YOU for sharing this new age funny with a plot no less story! I'm going to enjoy this ride I'm sure of it! read ya soon!
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May 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I always come back from time to time and check if this story has been updated. I really wish you'd continue it as i'm enamored by both the characters with their hidden imperfections and the story line. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!
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December 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just read the entire thing through. It's a very interesting story, has deliciously heated scenes, and I love the depth of character and the difference in traits of people from different areas. The witch is probably the most obvious case, but still. Intriguing. I feel sorry for the guard that got mind-jacked, though.
I will note, however, that you might want to look into a beta for your grammar, as you mixed up you're/your (etc.) fairly frequently. Also might want to go through and check that you're using the right character's names, because there were one or two spots where you didn't and it kind of threw me. Nothing big, just little things that a competent beta could help with.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading more!
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu
I will note, however, that you might want to look into a beta for your grammar, as you mixed up you're/your (etc.) fairly frequently. Also might want to go through and check that you're using the right character's names, because there were one or two spots where you didn't and it kind of threw me. Nothing big, just little things that a competent beta could help with.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading more!
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu
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December 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1-10. Wooo! I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. I'm assuming you're using auto grammar and spell check. Love the concept of your story and the characters are awesome to boot. Looking forward to future updates. :D
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November 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
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November 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm the type who doesn't usually review, bu I love Phee; he's adorable! Just wanted to say thanks for sharing this with all of us. And that even though I probably won't review a lot, I'll still be here reading, and anxiously waiting for each update. Hope to see more chapters soon. I can't wait to read what happens next between Liam and Phee.