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October 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO TO SHORT!!! but its quite the hook, ya got my attention! keep gong you could really build off of this.
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October 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So far I am intrigued! ^^ looking forward to seeing where this is headed.
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October 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to your next chapter! <3
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October 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back - I can't wait to read more of this story - I want to know more about Lance - and the curse of the Lantis family.
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October 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like it! I hope you keep updating because this little chapter was enough to grab my interest and now I have questions that need answering. lol
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October 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Seems very interesting.... Please update soon!!
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October 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Curious and Curiouser, more please.
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October 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sounds really interesting- definitely looking forward to more. Will you be updating your other stories in the future? I found Tests ages ago and was disappointed when it wasn't continued (I was really enjoying it). Anyway, I will definitely be keeping an eye out for this one :)
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October 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm interested in reading more :)
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October 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great intro chapter. I like your writing style.