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August 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Keep writing please. Great attention grabber, now I'm hooked. Please finish it!!!
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June 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
More please
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May 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1-2. OOOOOOO Now this is interesting! I want to know what happens next! Update please!
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October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That starts really interessting!!! I totally like it so far!!!! Hope that we will get to know Lance and Donnovan better learn more about lances background!!! Hope you will update soon!!! See you!!
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October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I wish your chapters were longer :(
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October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
its interesting and i think u hooked me already
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October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am interested to see how this goes. thank you for posting
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October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ohh this story seems very interesting. Poor lance. ;)
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October 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it. I was hoping to get more explanation of that first scene, but I suppose I'll have to wait for that. I hope you write more soon.
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October 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
More please!