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for Harland

by Evanscent

person anonymouse
schedule March 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update this soon. I first read your story on Literotica and then found it here. SO happy to read more chapters.
person MrsMonster
schedule December 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So far so good i like where the story is going and love the smutty goodness. Im actually glad you made the mom mean makes me not feel bad or be upset with them fir messing around. Keep it up!
person Anon
schedule December 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I so glad you continued the story. But what a wait. I don't trust Harland, he seems like he's starting pimp Kelly out to his friend. I wish Kelly had at least talked to here mom or asked her questions about what Harland told her. What he told Kelly about what her mom so called did to him I really believe he did to her mom. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person kat
schedule March 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sexy story. I am curious to see what happens when the mother finds out.
person Anon
schedule March 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
oh me gusta this chapter

You haven't updated in a while. ): Please get the next chapter up soon!
person exolove
schedule October 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad I found this story! It's not so taboo but there's still the elements of it as you have stated in the first chapter. There's something dangerously attractive to this kind of stories. Maybe because it is in human nature to be attracted and find satisfaction in things that are generally "prohibited" or "frowned upon". I am loving this story! I'm looking forward to this. This is hot!
person Anon
schedule October 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter, it's so hot. Can you include some ass play next time?
schedule October 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good story, I like the way he is drawing it out of her making her break through her own boundaries. Can't wait for more!
person lovelyl
schedule October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good story. :D I like this kind of pairing, one paring I found I do like for some odd reason is the girl and her best friend's divorced/widowed father (he isn't that old and she ain't that young either).
schedule October 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story, Harland sounds hot as fuck! Hope you update again soon.