rate_review Reviews

This is just a must read. seriously.
I go through to many erotical novels in the internet which present the BDSM world without any justice to reality, especially with characters that are introduced to this kind of lifestyle in the story.
I love the interaction between Ian and Daniel. I find myself putting myself in the same spot as Daniel and feeling just the same as he does.
Daniel is a wonderful charater, all your characters are so charming in their own ways.
All I have left to say is that I sincerely hope you won't abandon this fanfic, because there is a fan out there who would very like to read to rest of this story.

I'm only on chapter 2 but just had to let you know that I'm really liking this so far. The jumps in time are a bit disconcerting but it seems to work well with the overall flow of the story.

I like that Daniel is pushing back against Ian's need for control, I have a feeling it won't last too long though. ;)

Your story is keeping me from working on my own projects which is usually something I hate but really I just can't stop reading...

Thanks for posting such an interesting distraction.

CL

WOW! just finished all 7 chapters now! I was reading them back to back from yesterday and really really enjoyed it! I was following Rorschach Blots before too and I have to say for a young author you have a very mature pen! I really love your stories!

Thanks for sharing and hopefully we get an update soon! ^_^

I love how your writing flows. Haven't read anything this good in a while. Unfortunately, I read all of the chapters in one sitting so I will have to patiently wait for the next update. Thanks! :)

Your story is really great. I can't wait to see the rest of it!

Wow, this story is amazing. I almost skipped it but am so glad I didn't. Ahh, Richard is going to meet Ian! The tension is killing me. Thanks for the story, hope to see an update sometime soon! :)

that was an interesting kink. getting off on someone's drowsiness? hilarious. ian and daniel are so gorgeous and ian is such a kook. I love this story it is so wonderfully written. thank you so much for writing this and continuing it. when i realised i had somehow missed this update i was flummoxed. i hate daniel's ex so much! every time he calls him dani i cringe. i cant wait for ian to finally learn the truth about daniel and his first love.

There is something very sweet about the relationship between Daniel and Ian. I have read about a lot of BDSM relationships and I find there is something comforting about this one. I think its a good thing. Its very sexy as well.
I don't like Richard! He is skeevy.

oh that good for nothing Richard *shakes fists*!! But what did Daniel expect? He should just be lucky that the man he shelved still wanted him.

Richard is such a bastard!!!!!!!!! freaking hell!!! I am so angsting for daniel and ian right now... i hope they find happiness... this is one of the most interesting and most interestingly told stories i have read on this site... and because i have no life, i have read almost all of the male/male on here... this is such a treasure of a story!!! i love you for writing this!!! i was soooo angry and soooo unsurprised when the fiancee showed up.... wahhh it is too sad... but at least it drove him into the arms of someone worthier lol