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for The Chain

by xXKuroTenshi666Xx

person iriskzk1
schedule October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
If Kiro and Adin get out of jail somehow together, I hope that Derek goes to because I love his character. Update soon please!
person dazedandconfused
schedule October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, is this story going to have like a paranormal/supernatural type turn like in shapeshifters? That would be so cool. I don't think Adin has nothing to do with what happened to those guys or Kiro either. Herald isn't as innocent as he seems - I don't think. I think the FBI has the wrong suspects and the potential killer is someone else that is able to shift and disappear possibly maybe one of the guards? I don't know just some ideas but I can't wait to read what happens next! Great chapter!

person Roya7777
schedule October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow! This story of yours is sooo awesome! So interesting ... I'm not really a review person but I just can't help writing these few lines! :P

Well, does Aidin has to personalities?! Seems like there is some one else in control of him when he attacked his attackers! :D

Well, just please update soon! I can't wait for more ...
person Anon
schedule September 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting better and better! I am in love~
person Talltree-san
schedule September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
...Woah what was that ending! And good thing those three rapists got their comuppins. But that ending, the questions are really starting to pile up now. Oh the suspense is killing me DX!
person Anon
schedule September 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
loooove~
person SinfulMind
schedule September 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like such "rough" stories. I am curious who is Kiro, how does he know Adin and why he decided all of sudden that Adin is going to be his.
person Sarkukka
schedule September 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Adin, luckily Kito came to his rescue. That Herald is quite a weasel, I was ready to smack him but at least he had a decency to run for help.
The last part with the mysterious avenger was really exciting and spooky. Very nice.
Thank you for the update. Hopefully we'll get a new shiny chapter soon. lol
person dazedandconfused
schedule September 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I want to punch Herald myself right now but guess he just did what he had to in order to survive. I am thinking that Adin and Kiro have a history together but Adin doesn't remember probably because whatever happened the night he supposedly killed all those people (which I am doubting now) didn't happen the way he and everyone else thinks. I really like Derek and hope nothing bad happens to him. Wow, what happened? who is this mysterious 'attacker' and is Adin in danger from him? Update soon, k, I love this story!
person Roriette
schedule September 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo I really like this story! I like how Adin isn't a prissy bitch and can hold his ground. I wonder what happened to him that made him go psycho? And why he feels like he needs to beat the crap out of Kiro.
Speaking of that yellow cab...hehehe. I adore Kiro ;3
Grr attempt rapists! If they mess with Adin again, I swear...