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for The Chain

by xXKuroTenshi666Xx

person iriskzk1
schedule October 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope Kiro beats the crap out of Herald and he should get Derek and Adin to help. That little worm deserves it!
person Anon
schedule October 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! YES <3
person Kellankyle
schedule October 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great job and storyline! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person Sarkukka
schedule October 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, the suspence is increasing. First a very nice insight to Derek then that cotton candy sweet moment between Adin and Kiro to the climax with hardcore FBI-agent Ms. Sheffield. Truly enjoyable chapter!
Thank you so much! Keep up the good work!
person Cham
schedule October 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am really really enjoying this story! Thank you so much for posting this one. I am enjoying the suspense on each characters backgrounds and true motives. Please update soon! Thank you again!
person eroburn
schedule October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah. glad i found this.
wonder if his little tiger cub killed them
or the big bad dragon did
person Vic
schedule October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh! Totally didn't expect them to be dead! This is awesome! Thanks.
person SinfulMind
schedule October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wooooohooooo! At last! I was waiting for this chapter! Thank you for updating :) Now, this is what one calls a complicated situation - Kiro may find himself arrested and put to prison for a REASON this time! I hope he won't and no one will find out about his involvement!
person Kosu
schedule October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Adin is so cute!
Love it, look forward to updates! Going to go check out your other fics now :P
person Talltree-san
schedule October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering what crimes Herald and Kiro commited to be thrown in jail for. Herald's crime yeah he definetly deserves jail time, but Kiro's dad paid the prison to have Kiro there. If I didn't know Kiro was there for Adin in the first place I would have ask you why the heck did his dad pay to have his son in prison and other questions. I understand Kiro and Adin being there for questioning but what's Herald's position in this?