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for The Chain

by xXKuroTenshi666Xx

schedule January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, this is so interesting---all the plot twists and mystery! Can't wait for the next update!
person idl
schedule January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story :) And I hope Derek finds someone. And is maybe the sub.
person SiLveR_eYEs
schedule October 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
omg, MORE PLZZZ!!!! I love this story cant wait for the next update!!!!!
person Kosu
schedule October 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow what a twist! I want to know what Adin is and what has happened in his past.
Cant wait to see what happens next! Looking forward to updates!
person Roya7777
schedule October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Thanks for the update ^_^

You know before this chapter, I have thought that Adin has been the one who killed those bastards! but know that he claims he was asleep at the time, the question is who???

Is there some one else involved in all this???

Ohhh ... please update soonnn (puppy eyes begging) I can't wait to read the next chapter ...
person eroburn
schedule October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh intriguing please continue
Can't wait for more :)
person Kosu
schedule October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wooo a update! I havent actually got the time to read it right now. Will have to later so im dead tired in the morning.
Thankies!
:)
person Talltree-san
schedule October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hm, I think I'm gonna like this FBI lady Danielle. And Herald is just a cowardly little douchebag hobgoblin DX!
person Cham
schedule October 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This just gets better and better. The plot has been, clearly, well thought out. The characters as well. iiiam enjoying this immensly. Thank you so much for the update!
person Roriette
schedule October 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Danielle is awesome.
Just plain awesome.
I vote her for prez.

Adin...I wasn't expecting that, but it make sense too.
Herald you bitch. Wait till Kiro gets his hands on you...hoe.