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for The Chain

by xXKuroTenshi666Xx

person Franz
schedule February 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I liked it very much. I can' t wait how it goes between Adin and Kiro, They are so hot together. Please Update soon !!!
person Raafling
schedule February 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Woo, looks like Christmas came early for Kiro! But I do feel bad for Derek :( Please tell me he did not confess to the killings?
person m_kren2
schedule February 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Derek i hope is not the one whit confession. i realy like him to be free.
person Anon
schedule February 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
like it :)
person Qiana
schedule January 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love the story update soon
schedule January 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hm.... A dark story so far, but it IS a prison story.... I'm very much enjoying the twists, the more mystical aspects, and the FBI woman is a nice addition.
Personally I'm crossing my fingers that the convicted rapist...jerk...(*cough* I'd say worse, only if I start I won't stop for a while, so I won't start)...gets killed, because he doesn't seem the type to leave well enough alone.
I definitely liked the FBI woman getting clued in that something wasn't right with Adin's conviction.
Anyway, it's dark and twisted, but I've been known to laugh at some really dark things before, so it doesn't bother me. A little darkness often makes life seem brighter.
Thanks for the neat read! I'm looking forward to reading more!
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu
person CHoman
schedule January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
One of the better stories here. I'm enjoying the heck out of it, and I do hope the inspiration keeps going!
person Raafling
schedule January 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I’m so glad I got to read through this in one sitting, but now I have to wait for updates like everyone else XD I love the diversity of the characters in this story, I wouldn’t mind reading an entire story just about Danielle kicking ass and taking names. :p I do hope Harold is not out of the picture yet. He’s a slimy bastard, but that makes for an interesting villain. My guess is that Adin killed those guys, only he blacked it out, just like the massacre. I might be wrong completely of course, but I’m looking forward to finding it out!
person Cham
schedule January 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
woot! an update! Dragons and Tigers huh? I can guess which is which and I can't wait for more. Thank you so much for this
person bownie48
schedule January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update! I love this story. Finally Kiro gets it, Adin like the rest of us has no idea what he or you are. The suspense is killing me.