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November 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Ready to take a knife or whip to both Graven and Lukin
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November 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I doubt that Graven is abusing the poor man- although who knows what the real situation is.
Kailin is such a child sometimes. Looking forward to the bonding ceremony and angry smexing. Haha
Kailin is such a child sometimes. Looking forward to the bonding ceremony and angry smexing. Haha
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November 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
As usual you leave me wanting to throw things at my monitor because there isn't another chapter! I can't wait to see what happens and what is done about Graven, if Kailin is right about him or if it is just a misunderstanding. I frankly agree with Kailin, but I could be wrong!
Can't wait till next time!
Can't wait till next time!
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November 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well Graven shocked the heck out of me!!!!!!
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November 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice job, I like how the story is progressing.
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November 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I know I'm going to sound like the greedy creature I am but I can scarcely wait another second for you to update this magnificent piece of art. I've been enthralled by the emotions each character feels and the turmoil they create for themselves with each misunderstanding. I'm assuming you won't kill off zak but in case the thought passed your mind DON'T, I MEAN YOU CAN'T! the poor guy literally just got bonded that would just be terrible and I'd be super sad, he's a wonderful character plus the guilty of his death would eat at the little prince forever.
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November 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10. Woot! Adrenaline rush! Thanks for the awesome update! Keep up the wicked writing!
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November 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ugh so good! Please please please update sooooon!
XOXO
XOXO
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November 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
For some reason, the site didn't seem to want to let me log in and review this.
Recently stumbled on this story (looking for interesting original stories, yaoi being my preference) and I really like it. The clear differences between the doms and subs - and even between characters who are subs or doms - are wonderful. I really enjoy seeing the different ways that Kailin disobeys pretty much everyone except his father and Lukin. It clearly shows that, while he may be a sub, he doesn't necessarily have to obey if he doesn't want to. (This latest chapter personifies that to a new extreme: combat. Very well done.)
I also like how Kailin's brothers are amazed that Lukin doesn't scare Kailin at all. It made me laugh.
The differences between the realms is also well laid out - and I can see from this tenth chapter that you're going to have relations between the realms deteriorating. Makes sense, even if it makes things dangerous.
As to the flashbacks - I've never had a real problem with them being even in the middle of fight scenes, so long as the flashback's about something important to do with the fight. Yours was - and, from what I remember off the top of my head from reading previous chapters, the others in this story have all essentially underlined why the characters act and react the way they do - Lukin and Kailin in particular.
You're doing very well with this story and I'm looking forward to reading more!
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu
Recently stumbled on this story (looking for interesting original stories, yaoi being my preference) and I really like it. The clear differences between the doms and subs - and even between characters who are subs or doms - are wonderful. I really enjoy seeing the different ways that Kailin disobeys pretty much everyone except his father and Lukin. It clearly shows that, while he may be a sub, he doesn't necessarily have to obey if he doesn't want to. (This latest chapter personifies that to a new extreme: combat. Very well done.)
I also like how Kailin's brothers are amazed that Lukin doesn't scare Kailin at all. It made me laugh.
The differences between the realms is also well laid out - and I can see from this tenth chapter that you're going to have relations between the realms deteriorating. Makes sense, even if it makes things dangerous.
As to the flashbacks - I've never had a real problem with them being even in the middle of fight scenes, so long as the flashback's about something important to do with the fight. Yours was - and, from what I remember off the top of my head from reading previous chapters, the others in this story have all essentially underlined why the characters act and react the way they do - Lukin and Kailin in particular.
You're doing very well with this story and I'm looking forward to reading more!
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu
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November 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm so relieved there's an update!
I loved this chapter, I really liked both of their thoughts during the binding, that was so hot and cute :), and later fighting the attackers off! I'm so glad that turned out ok!
Thank you very much for writing, I look forward to the next one! xxx
I loved this chapter, I really liked both of their thoughts during the binding, that was so hot and cute :), and later fighting the attackers off! I'm so glad that turned out ok!
Thank you very much for writing, I look forward to the next one! xxx