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for Kailin's Keeper

by projectamy

person Midnightsscream
schedule January 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Damn it Kailin! Stop fucking it up! I can't neceassrily blame him, but I was also surprised when he didn't defend Lukin. He's always such a spitfire and adores Lukin. I feel really bad for Lukin, but at the same time I'm glad that he refuses to bond with Kailin if Kailin truly doesn't want him. That's love and I can only hope that Kailin will realize that every once in awhile he needs to be willing to chase after Lukin. great job!
person Chibikodo
schedule January 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ugh I just want to punch Kailin's mother for being a manipulative b@stard. Seriously she just made this story more frustrating. Lol Good for the plot but not the audience. Haha
person mm-c
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ugh! you left it on a cliff-hanger!!!! LOL I anxiously await for your next chapter.
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooo!! Poor Lukin T_T

Kailin, you idiot! You better go and grovel and get him back!!!

Ooo~ that'll be a nice sex scene ~_^
person anonagain
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
glad to see you back with these two although I did really enjoy Husband for Holidays! This chapter was awesome with all new twists and misconstrued actions and emotions thrown in! Can't WAIT for the next one, though! Thank you and Happy New Year! Looking forward to more!
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGANUPDATEOMGOMGOMG MY LIFE IS AWESOME OMGOMGOMGOMG

But seriously I love this and Lukin is so noble and cute and sweet and OMGOMGMG
person Nine
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
No! why are our boys being so silly again! oh i love this!!! Rek!!!! but lukin is being so foolish!!!!!!!
person Obsessive_much?
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG WHYYYYYYYYYYY? Why why why why why why why???? I feel like i have just been sucker punched in the stomach with all of these feelings!!!! Ugh, I am like seriously crying right now. I feel so bad for Lukin!!! I absolutely love this story, even if the ending to the most recent chapter ripped my heart out of my chest and then put it through a paper shredder. I am seriously like in a glass case of emotion right now and I won't be able to deal until Kailin tells Lukin that he loves him!!! OMG please please please please please please update soon for the sake of my sanity!!! Great job btw!!!
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO nononononononooooooo not goodbye!! No nononononooooo! These two SERIOUSLY need to learn to freaking COMMUNICATE!!!! Great chapter! worth the wait indeed! Oh update fast Amy, I may burst from anticipation!!!!! Stubborn asses!!!!!!! Whew okay think I got someof that out. Thank you for the update and much much love lady!!!!
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I can't say I was really surprised by your introduction of Zaks' bonded (Graven, right?), because you described him so well in the previous chapters, but certainly he's quite a contrasting character, compared to the others so far.
Lukin...seems to need to start thinking about how to talk to Kailin to avoid these kinds of conflicts. Maybe someone should point this out to him? Or would it work better if Kailin got mad and blurted it out, instead? ;)
I'm looking forward to the bonding and all, yes, no worries for you there.
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu