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Lol They're too late because Kailin has already been pretty much claimed by Lukin. But Kailin, he's so silly to not realize that everyone is different.

The Queen just leaves a bad taste in my mouth- of course, she's not a very likeable or sympathetic character. :)

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Wonderful to see you and the boys back!!! Lovedddd this chapter and glad to see they finally got their points across!!! sad to see you take down ruin but I understand your reasons and I will always look forward to all of your writings especially the revamped ones! I really liked the way you combined the genes in that story without doing the mpreg thing so it was really original! Anyways looking forward to more and thank you for writing and producing work that means so much to you and perfecting it ad sharing with us that perfection ! :)

Lukin! Lukin! Lukin! YAYAYAYA
Thanks for the update!

So much love! Best chapter ever omg, can't wait for more!

I remember missing out on the previous chapter because when it came out I wasn't in the mood or something. So now I had a treat of whole two chapters to read.

It had been some time so I scrolled through the previous chapters to remind myself what the story was about and I quickly remembered how mad I was at Lukin for forcing his decision about the bonding on Kailin like that. So now I was really glad that everyone had the chance to give their opinion on the subject even if a little rushed. And I'm kind of pleasantly surprised that they managed to understand each other without majorly hurting each other in the process.

I can see that something else is coming up but now that I'm assured of their mutual feelings I believe they'll overcome the obstacle more easily.

I'm probably repeating myself but just to be on the safe side - a wonderfully written story. I'm looking forward to the continuation.

I have been in love with this story from the very first chapter. It never lost momentum or became unfocussed, and the claiming scene was pefect. I look forward to the rest of the story. Thanks for this.

That was wonderful Amy! Oh my GAWD that was wonderful! Either that or I'm having a hot flash and I'm not QUITE that old yet! Great chapter! Now waht, though? His stupid mother???? I want nothing to happen to them, they are FIANLLY on the same track, but what fun would that be right?? teehee! Was so happy to see the update! Thanks for posting! Much Love!!!

oooooooh yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!! great chapter truly it was and the cliffy to boot even better! thank you for sharing!

I'm sorry but I have to ask if you are planing to post a new chapter any time soon, I really hope you will xxx

Are you going to continue this? The cliffhanger is killing me. I adore this story. I love the characters, I love their dynamic and I love the plot. Pleeeeeeeeease finish this .