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i do hope you plan on continuing this for a long time! i know sometimes that if you have a large following that it gets harder to write for yourself. as always your work is amazing and you should be proud. also, this concept really appeals to me, ha, so you can say i'm a big fan.

also wondering on how its going with your other two stories still in progress?

I love this, you write so clearly and so well and I love the world you have created for your story. You manage to conjure up the atmosphere of the place without having to write long, detailed explanations. We get a further glimpse of it with every new chapter of the story, and I love the characters. Did I mention the story is hot? Well it is. Erotic and exotic. I look forward to more!

Rekking burning suns!!! I am into this story!!!! I love how Araz is so brotherly with Paniz and i love the way Paniz is always trying to maintain his professional distance, i love the way he wont get over his 'lower standing' and feel socially equal with them... so sweet... wahhh I am so so so in love with Kailin!! i love the way he is so strong and capable despite being a submissive... what i dont quite understand is what roles submissives are allowed to play in this society... you mentioned that at meetings/discussions sometimes submissives sit at the feet of their dominants so that the important conversation flows above them... does that mean they do not take part in important decisions?? what would happen if the first born child of the king was a submissive? would that mean they couldn't rule?? you have done an excellent job explaining how this world works without making it feel like i am reading a wikipedia article about this society so well done you! but then i expect nothing less from my sweet precious amy project... lol wahhh the thing about your stories is this,... as i am reading them... although, theoretically i know that they will probably have a happy ending, my stomach is churning and my heart is writhing with the fear and doubt and anxiety over the thought that maybe it won't?? there is something about your writing that makes me feel very keenly for the characters and how i want their happy endings so badly! but i am always worried that everything is going to be awful... at the moment i just feel sick with the thought that paniz and kailin wont bond... wahhhhh i know they probabaly will in the end... but the angst your chapters put me through!! i love it!!!
also... are their slaves in this land? Araz mentioned selling a slave a chapter ago... what if the slave was a dominant? this dominant/submissive thing is fascinating... i think you also mentioned that everyone sits on a spectrum between these two opposites... what do the people in the middle do???
thank you very very much for sharing!

I really like this story so far. It's well written and no, I don't find it confusing. I really like everyone so far, but especially Lukin and Kailin.I like how Kailin's feelings regarding Lukin are starting to change. I think they'd make an awesome couple. I can't believe Lukin is going to try and get with another submissive though:(tsk, tsk.Though it does make sense considering he thinks he doesn't have a chance with Kailin. Haha, Kailin is going to stay the night with him though. That will be fun. Also, I have to say you're doing a good job handling the flashbacks. Usually flashbacks really annoy me and take me away from the story, but yours are interesting and relevant so good job! I'm excited to read more:)

VERYYYYYYYYYYYYYY interesting start! ^^ can't wait to read more. Kailin seems like he's going to be a really big handful

Sleepover?! Another submissive!? Ohhh the plot thickens! XD I enjoyed it, really! And at the same time, I feel for Paniz :D But i so dearly love his frustration and it's only natural he errr...tries to stave it off or relieve himself, right? xD The prince can find out so there's more jealousy and more plot!

Thank you for updating so fast! :DDD :3

yes it is perfectly clear what is going on and I want more!! Really interesting world you have created and very charming characters! Please update as soon as possible! And thank you for these already fantastic three chapters! :)

I really like it so far and cant wait to see whats going to happen when Kai finally figures out he wants Luk. Hopefully a continuing trend of what Kai wants Kai gets.

great ch, loving this story, really excited about the next ch!

Great set up. I'm loving it. I do hope you'll still continue your other stories.