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September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting world you've built. Kailin seems to be a tricky submissive. I feel sort of bad for Lukin but not really. What are his thoughts regarding binding anyway?
The tidbit we got about Kailin's mom was also interesting. So this 'drive' that they have... Is it more than just 'instinct'?
The tidbit we got about Kailin's mom was also interesting. So this 'drive' that they have... Is it more than just 'instinct'?
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September 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Kailin bonded wit someone who is chosen by his father? I think that not only Lukin, but Kailin won't like it either :) I can't wait for Kailin and Lukin being together, it can't happen soon enough :D
I really enjoy the story. I like the flashbacks in the story and that it is not from only one POV. I can't wait for next update. Please keep writing :)
I really enjoy the story. I like the flashbacks in the story and that it is not from only one POV. I can't wait for next update. Please keep writing :)
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September 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I meant to review after I read this last night, but it was way past my bedtime and I feel asleep before I could. lol you're story kept me reading until I got to the end, I couldn't put it down. I love the dynamics between the dominant and submissive personalities. I'm wiring a story myself that plays on a similar concept and I loved seeing your take on it. ^^ I love Kailin and Lukin both! fantastic story and I can't wait to read more!!!
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September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Kailin being bonded by his father's decision? I have a feeling Kailin won't take it well either. Those to need to be together. I'm waiting for it. lol. great job and can't wait for the next update
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September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter :) my favorite story on here so far.
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September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter with the hint that you gave us. i wonder if the guy is going to be dark lk luk. yumm.
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September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So Araz knows something is or will be happening between them :)? Fun!!
I can't explain how much I adore this story. I can't wait for a new chapter every time.
and, it's fucking hot...
I can't explain how much I adore this story. I can't wait for a new chapter every time.
and, it's fucking hot...
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September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Also, “Good night, Sir.” ? Is that going to pass unnoticed or is it not indicating to anything?
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September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am really, really, really enjoying this story. I am intrigued by this world you have created and I am pleased that I am able to follow and understand it very well. The bit of angst and nice opposing natures of the characters make this the best for me. Do please continue. Thank you so much.
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September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ugh this sexual tension is KILLING me! But, I love it, of course :)