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for Kailin's Keeper

by projectamy

person miles
schedule October 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter !
I want to know ! Is Paniz the future bonded ?
Update soon, please... :)
person anonagain
schedule October 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
you make me angry. lol. i get so frustrated when I get to the end of a chapter and think about waiting for another fabulous chapter. arghhhhhhhhh the anticipation is excruciating! usually i don't beg but please please update soon? please? lol thank you for writing stories that are amazing and frustrating at the same time lol because I just want to sit down for hours and read them! ;)
schedule October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is such a cute story! Please update soon!!
schedule October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please update!!!
person Niamh
schedule October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I've been waiting for something that would grab my attention for a while, and this is it. I have been thinking about it since I read it and I can't wait for you to update. I love the plot and it hits all my buttons. Keep up the great work.

Elaine
person eroburn
schedule September 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i want them to huggle
and for him not to have smexy with others
this story is so awesome
please finish it?
person Nine
schedule September 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this world is so extremely interesting!!
I just freaking NEED these two boys to end up bonded!! I am in agony every moment i read this!! but it is a lovely agony!! and poor little paniz!! I love learning about the pasts of these characters.. the prince is so innocent and lovely and bossy and wonderful! It is all too brilliant. by the time i am finished reading the chapter i can barely articulate myself... apologies
person lo
schedule September 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting and nicely written. You have set this up well.
person SunaoTsuji
schedule September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1-4. Wooo~ Love how the story is progressing in a steady pace. Just enough to paint the picture without giving away at what the final piece will look like. Beautiful characters. Each very distinctive with out over lapping the others. Your concept of Doms and Subs having their own drive makes this story interesting in itself considering that it's in a setting with Kings as rulers. Also that Doms and Subs are the norm, makes this story a must read.
person Kay
schedule September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I love it!