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October 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Of course Paniz would punch Araz in the face lmao. Great chapter!! Can't wait to see what happens next :)
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October 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi I'm really enjoying this story. It's actually well written and the dialogue flows well and easy to read. Unlike alot of other stories it's entertaining ie the interactions between the brothers and Lukin and the way you describe their inner thoughts is great. Looking forward to the next chapters, although it's obvious the lead characters get together and live happily ever after....I actually don't mind because they are characters I like alot. Keep up the great work!
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October 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yus! I am so happy the brothers are smarter then to keep Kailin away! I mean really, I don't think Lukin in a man to take one lying down. Thank you so much for the update! I truly adore this story. It offers so much visually and the plot is engrossing. Great work.
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October 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy you have updated :D!! *happy dance*
and Yay the are together once again, I was afraid Lukin would have to chase him for a number of chapters before they are reunited and I needed at least some fluff before/in case anything horrible happens to either of them soon,
I guess I've been reading a few stories lately in which writers make their characters suffer excessively without any nice things happening, so I can say that at least for myself this chapter is very satisfying :) so thank you!! and I don't see it as a filler because I got exactly what I hoped for :D
Thank you for writing xxx
and Yay the are together once again, I was afraid Lukin would have to chase him for a number of chapters before they are reunited and I needed at least some fluff before/in case anything horrible happens to either of them soon,
I guess I've been reading a few stories lately in which writers make their characters suffer excessively without any nice things happening, so I can say that at least for myself this chapter is very satisfying :) so thank you!! and I don't see it as a filler because I got exactly what I hoped for :D
Thank you for writing xxx
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October 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! Very addicting!
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October 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Go Lukin go. I'm glad Kailin is calming down. Just like I had hoped the time away from lukin just made him miss him. I really hope Lukin admits his feelings. That will make everything go so much smoother I think. great job!
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October 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, he really is THE dominant one ! I like it ! ^^
Kailin will open his eyes soon.. I hope...
Can't wait for more... :)
Kailin will open his eyes soon.. I hope...
Can't wait for more... :)
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October 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ok done with all seven and my eyes hurt but I need more! Love it!
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October 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
thank you so much for not torturing me and letting lukin meet up with kailin again nice and quickly. RELIEF!!! and i am very intrigued to see where Kailin was going with the whole pre-emptive strike thing... i love these boys... they are so great together. i really love the submissive/dominant thing... so so so gorgeous. and i love the kind of submissive that kailin is.
i am a bit annoyed at the older princes though... why did they have to choose such a dangerous location for their machinations??? i just want my boys to be safe and sound lol... but at the same time i know that the tension just makes the good times sweeter lol
thank you so much for the update! it will colour my day nicely... although... during my japanese speaking test... i will be thinking of this... could mean that things go a little askew...
i am a bit annoyed at the older princes though... why did they have to choose such a dangerous location for their machinations??? i just want my boys to be safe and sound lol... but at the same time i know that the tension just makes the good times sweeter lol
thank you so much for the update! it will colour my day nicely... although... during my japanese speaking test... i will be thinking of this... could mean that things go a little askew...
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October 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Of course it had to be Lukin! And now he has to fight for his little sub. That's what is supposed to happen and it would be terrible if it didn't happen that way.
You are doing a good job of developing your characters and making me, as a reader, care about what happens to them next. I also think that you've set it up perfectly for a sequel where Araz finds a bondmate.
Keep up the good work!
You are doing a good job of developing your characters and making me, as a reader, care about what happens to them next. I also think that you've set it up perfectly for a sequel where Araz finds a bondmate.
Keep up the good work!