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I think you're playing with Lukin's nerve ! :)
How many days before he can bond with his little prince ?!
Thanks for the fast update. ^^

Nice lil taste of their future intimacy! Love it! Waiting for more! Was so happy to see your post under mine I couldn't click fast enough to get some more!

oh the joy of an update! i love the idea that sex before marriage is fine but bondage is not because it is so much more intimate... so intriguing! interesting to see another kind of dominant/submissive relationship...
this desert country is so scary... am freaking out for the safety of our boys!! lol... i love how quickly lukin is trying to get home so he can have the ceremony, i love the way he wants so badly to do it now and anywhere but is holding off so that the family can attend. so so so cute.
yay for this story! yay for you!
i love your stories. they are such excellent escapism. they are so wonderfully written and the plots are gorgeous. the relationships you create between such loveable characters proves you have an amazing talent. thank you for sharing it with us!! yay for you!

I kept avoiding this story (no clue why) I am loving this one!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for more

I can't remember the last time I got into a story as quickly as I did this one. I love this story. I love it so much I can't wait until you post the next chapter. I love the language they use and the way you describe the character. You have so much talent as a writer I am jealous. Please write faster because I hate waiting.

Woot! Love the updates. I'm eagerly awaiting for the next one. :D

Mmmm... I dont want to wait for the next chapter! Update soon! Also, I don't mind waiting for the "smutty stuff"--the build up is just as good!

Oh hi there ^^
Just wanna drop by to say you are one awesome writer, I know you've been getting that compliment a lot ;p
I read all your stories and noticed the pattern in them, no I'm not even here to complain about the pattern, it's actually the reason why I am so drawn to your stories especially this one 'Kailin's Keeper'. You have this unusual style in tackling a 'Dominant/Submissive' story and your plots amazes me as well. A sure dominant, the snarky submissive who won't submit easily and an unusual crisis thrown in their way to keep them separated for a 'short' span of time and re-think (which is most of the time in favor (or not) of the snarky submissive) ^^

The relationship between the brothers are cute too ^^ I knew Araz and Axial are definitely in favor of Lukin for their uncontrollable little runaway Kailin, no man can rein in that little pesky brat other than Paniz himself, but a little denial is just so so so cute~

Is Kai submitting himself to Lukin already (with wide open arms to boot)?

so excited to read more! I love this story!! and Zaks is awesome!

haha glad to see Kailin maybe coming around...just maybe? Can't wait for the next chapter especially since you promised us such nice things in it :D