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Nice chapter, I love the tension in this and the storyline still has not gotten boring, great job.

Chapter 8. Woot! Love the detour and I'm eagerly awaiting Kailin's claiming. Thanks for the hard work!

Whoa! I love love love this. I cannot wait for more to happen between them, but the slow build will be worth it when it does finally happen! Also, they are both idiots for not realizing how the other feels. Dumb boys.

I hope the bump in the road isn't related to anything dangerous or whatnot. Thanksfor the update/new chapter! Lukin will win Kailin over!

Great Story, can't wait for more for I'm hanging on your every sexy word1

This is really my favourite story. I love your take on a dominant/submissive relationship, and the story you are telling is so fascinating, too. Every time you update I'm really excited I can read more. Please keep up the good work!

Yay!! this was a lovely chapter, they're getting along and it's cute awww!!! I can;t wait for more. xxx

Ugh! I love this! I hope Axial didn't get caught in the storm/ made it back okay!

XOXO

I really like this story and look forward to the updates. I also hope that Captian Zaks stays in the story for a little while longer because I like him and want to see how he is with his dominant

I really enjoy your story! Though the fact that society is divided into dominants and submissives is a little maddening to me. I was kind of hoping that while Kailin's and Lukin's miscommunication continued for a while Kailin would make Lukin's life a living hell, showing him that even though he is submissive by nature he can be just as strong and opinionated as anyone else. I'm still kind of hoping to see an occasion where that happens. Lukin gets on my nerves a bit with his haughty attitude towards who is his and who isn't.

Anyway great story. I like the way you write. Not with too many words but still graphic. I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter.