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for Kailin's Keeper

by projectamy

schedule October 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh! When is Lukin going to confess his love for Kaillin?!?! SLASH I'm stoked that Kailin is starting to understand his feelings for Lukin...yayayay
person nine
schedule October 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yay!! so happy!! i love that kailin is getting more aware of his undying love for lukin!! there is something about your stories that, as i read them, there is this lovely feeling of "kyaaa so cute and so lovely and i want them to be together forever and ever" that swells in my heart and takes over... i love your characters. you make me love them always!
lol about burning the license. can not freaking wait for lukin to realise 1. that it is missing (i bet it is the first thing he notes when he wakes up lol) and 2. for lukin to realise what happened to it... kyahahaaa good reading ahead deshoo
i love you!
person Anon
schedule October 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh don't worry, all your stories are gold, honestly, perfect. :)
person bambi4real
schedule October 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm one of your sporadic reviewers. My keyboard is old and missing some keys making typing difficult and tedious at the best of times. I have been enjoying your story and my lack of reviews is no reflection on the excellence of your writing.
schedule October 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG I managed to skip the update amongst the pile of others, but now I checked the story page and yes!!
Firstly, I didn't mention before that I really like the world you've created here.

Secondly, people who don't review this are ungrateful spoiled brats who take an amazing story like this for granted, haha, I'm not entirely kidding,
I too don't review a few stories that I regularly follow, but that's because they aren't my favorites, I just don't have feelings for them that I need to express through reviews. this story and Pack Dynamics are two of my favorites, they hit me just right, and I just need to say it...and to thank you, you put time and effort into this and I really appreciate it because I really love them. I'm compelled to say it.(it's not like I don't have anything better to do with my time than to write reviews)

Also you can't know who is reading the story (they could be different ranges of people who don't review for different reasons) and what they think of it, and people simply have different tastes...I'm amazed that some stories here and even more elsewhere get tons of reviews when I think they're so horribly bad that when I start reading them it makes me wanna shout in despair LOL!

This chapter too has made me feel very happy, but haha he managed to destroy the license! aw! and the messing around in the stream was wonderfully hot :D
and I loved this: “No. You’re going to teach me the difference…” :)


person Wolfwitch
schedule October 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This est awesome! Ilove their dynamic. Eagerly awaiting more!
person kissedbymidnight
schedule October 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh, Kailin's going to be in trouble. Poor thing didn't even do it on purpose. He actually seemed to kind of like it. I bet Lukin would feel better if Kailin admitted that. Poor Lukin will probably really think Kailin doesn't want to be with him now. I don't want his feelings to be hurt. Anyway, I really like them as a couple. I don't review a lot because I'm lazy, but this is an awesome story!:) I love their relationship and how it has depth that a lot of romances lack now a days. It's good to see how they've interacted through life and how there's this trust and affection between them, even if its just recently turned sexual for Kailin. I can't wait to see what happens next and how their bonding will play out. I like how Lukin is willing to give Kailin full body rights too. While Kailin may be the submissive I don't feel that they are unequal, they just need different things out of the relationship. Great job:) I'm glad you shared it with us.
schedule October 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You're nuts if you think we don't like it I for one almost squealed when I saw the update! Love it and keep it coming!
person Penny
schedule October 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm one the people who have been reading but not reviewed... until now, sorry! This a fab story. What do I like?.. well all the characters, not just the main couple but the brothers, Zaks, theKing and the newly bonded guy (can't remember how to spell his name begins with V) anyway the story is well written,easy to read and flows well. The humour has me laughing and the dialogue is realistic. You're obviously an accomplished writer and talented. So thanks for writing and I look forward to the next chapter!
person Wolfwitch
schedule October 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just FYI, some of those hits are also from those of us who have reread the story like 20 times between updates because we love it so much. That said, OMGOMGOMGOMG UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! Ahem. I love Kailion. He's so sweet and clueless in a lot of ways and Lukin is so obtuse but loveable and amazing! I don't review often because my Internet situation is... Awkward, but I love this and can't wait for even more!