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Oh Zaks! Get well soon! Kailin is very capable of handling his own affairs. I am pleased to see that. Luk, came through to be the ultimate Keeper that he is. Well done. Thank you the chapter and I really cannot wait until the next one.

I absolutely love your stories, especially this one.Your characters are so real, even if the situations they are in might not be :)
And regarding the flashbacks,I usually hate them, but they are well done and right for this story. They allow us to get a feel of their relationship and made me fall in love with them :)
Keep writing, you're doing a great job!!!

Love this story, love this update! I enjoy the flashbacks as it tells the story of their relationship and how they felt about each other growing up, so please don't stop writing them.
I would like to encourage you to write a little of Zak and his dominant too please, thanks! Can't wait either for more of Kallins brothers.

I am so proud of Kailin for being brave to save Lukin.I can't wait what kind of punishment he will get alter.:)

Omg update!!! Spaz alert! So much spazzing!

I like the flasback. I feel that it explains a lot about Kailin's character, since it's now proven that he can and will go against his dominant's will, if it's absolutely necessary.

LOVE this story, I've been mournfully checking back, despairi g for a update for the last 12 days. Love it.

I like it when you write about little Kailin and his keeper. Those childwood memories are great and funny ! :)
Thanks for the new update. Thrilling chapter !

uh oh...... this is going to be an interesting conversation to say the least! can't wait for more!!

um so not to sound ungrateful and whiny but....please update? Your stories are like addictive drugs/narcotics/drug of choice so after a certain time us crazy readers start having that itch for more. wow it is really late and I sound crazy but yea I was just in the mood for a good story that is so delicately and complexly assembled juuuust right and of course I thought of you! Re-reading Pack Dynamics to appreciate it fuller, lol! Anyway thank you so much for writing and am anxiously awaiting your next update! Sorry to be pesky and badgering you nonetheless!

Awesome story, plz keep updating!

Chapter 9. Woot! An update! Thanks so much for the excitement! Really enjoying myself here with your story and with each new chapter that you upload. I'm an addict to your stories now and I can't get enough! Keep up the awesome writing!