rate_review Reviews

This is an interesting tale. I hope that you continue it. The wife and husband share a unique bond if he loves her that much in a time period like that. What is she going to do with her prisioners or more importanly what will he do with them. I like how you chose old names that have meaning. Most people would just put anything up. Please continue I await the next install ment....

Honestly I think your story would be much better with more descriptive passages, including apearances, landscapes, less complicates names that are so easy to misspel and difficult to memorize.. and much less 'summing up' character sketches - the story seems to be rather a retelling of some story than a real one.
Good luck with your writing!