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by TheHiddenLight

person Beau
schedule January 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love it
person Gisaeng
schedule September 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well this story is very sweet :)) I like how London and Kina are very sweet and caring to each other. I'm curious how it will develop. Although I have a feeling that London is hiding something. Maybe I'm wrong? We don't know much about him yet, after all.
I have one request concernig editing the text - I don't know if it's just me, but I would find it much easier to read if the text was split in smaller paragraphs than it is now. I don't know, my eyes seem to skip if it's so compact and then I have to read again.
:)