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for Souvenirs From Dead Worlds

by Overlordpotatoe

schedule January 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sam is a saint to resist all that! Kias is still adorable and he needs to jump Sam's bones!
person nine
schedule January 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
now i want brownies!!!!
lol "bag of dicks" will have to start using that one.
such a sweet moment when kias fell asleep... and then his fit if panic... poor dear.
i love this! thank you for the update
person sayure
schedule January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I liked the idea of replying to our reviews. It feel that you care about what we think and it sure give us the motivation to write you more. I like how in the same chapter you make us know how and what both main characters feel and think, better than wait the next chapter to read the action from another view. Keep updating, please.

Hey; English is my third language and I'm still not that good in it but the way you write is easy to understand, and for that, thank you.
person Amanda
schedule January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I keep waiting for Kias to say something and Sam to become suddenly shocked about what he's been assuming all along. Another great chapter!
schedule January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awww, Kias is so cute! And Sam is finally starting to get it! I love this, it's so sweet.
schedule January 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story, the characters have instant appeal and the way perfectly innocent behaviour has a sinister meaning for Kias is both heart-rending and extremely funny. I can't even begin to imagine how the poor guy will react to Jules' silly flirting, so you will have to update soon, please, so that I don't burst from anticipation! A wonderful story well told, moving and fun at the same time! Thanks very much for sharing this!
schedule January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Is it bad that I'm hoping Sam punches Jules, even though they're friends? I can't believe it! Poor Kias.
person nine
schedule January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
oh no! poor little kias is going to get the wrong idea again and spaz out with anxiety... oh i love him! and i love this story!! all the minor characters are intriguing as well! and i like the girls and their robo cat. i just love this!
person Amanda
schedule January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I give a damn. lol. I just started reading this story yesterday. It's really interesting. I can't wait to see how Kias reacted to that kiss.
person hjk
schedule January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love ur story so much can't wait, I hope you update today! :)