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oh how you delight in telling us nothing but in a lovely and interesting way. what is the deal with everything? i want to know. Salem in just too mysterious and i have a thousand theories but they all seem wrong. thank you for another wonderful read. love from nine.

hell yes i am a yaoi fan girl... which is why this deux ex machina of a turn around with Rain is so so so so so so so so kawaii and lovely and to me absolutely freaking believable... i think you reached new heights of loveliness in this chapter not just in terms of your writing but in terms of making me love these characters so so much!!! wahhhh salem so so so gorgeous... and Rain so so so real... and lol about the party... made me feel like i was back in high school... you are amazing in your observations... you are kind of profound. the ending phone call was so sweet!
but what is Salem??? at first, i thought he must be a demon or something supernatural... but then as the story progressed he seemed so ordinary and human and i was thinking "well i really got that wrong" (and i was al little disappointed) but now the thing with his eyes makes me think i might have been on to something after all... but what exactly? lol if i am wrong.
and i also want to thank you for the speed of your updates! thank you for not making us wait and suffer that anguish!!

Oh no! Poor Rain and his metaphoric heart. I am confused about one thing though: does Salem care? He said he didn't but we all know how people like to lie about their feelings. However he feels about Rain I'm still *hashtag* Team Salem.

I think Salem is worming his way inside Rain's head, and not in a bad way.

It's funny how Salem knows Rain better than Rain's so-called friends. Salem actually knows Rain better than his own mom.

Great chapter! It seems the dynamics of their relationship are slowly changing. And for the better. :)

I would have done the same thing as Rain at those kinds of party. I would just rather stay at home and read XD!

lol. Salem handles him like a pro. I think the turning point is definitely happening. I'm glad Salem is changing as well, becoming softer with him, more caring I think is unconsciously endearing him to Rain. great job and can't wait for the next chapter. :D

i am SOOO damn obsessed with this story right now!! I should hate Salem (for what he did to Rain) but I can't help but love him and I keep getting drawn in by him AND Rain. please update again soon! i'm in love right now..

hmmmm... a whole chapter dedicated to this side of salem... and that slight reveal about a mother and a sister...
i still dont know what to think. but i still love salem. and i love the ambiguity of their relationship... gahhhh i just want to know all the answers!!! thank you for another speedy and finely crafted update.
i want someone to pamper me like that next time i get sick!!! (but i dont want salem to do it lol)

This chapter definitely showed a loving and caring side to Salem. But as Rain said, he probably only wants him to get better so he can take advantage of him again.

Although I will admit, he is a good caretaker. He knows just what to make and do to make Rain feel better.

Great chapter Kereliah! You always leave me wanting more! lol

I like this side of Salem better...much better. Poor Rain.lol. I get whiny like him when I'm sick though too. Hopefully the next chapter he'll be feeling much better. great job!