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I wonder if Salem knows how to pick locks? I can't remember if Rain did lock the doors or not! O_o

man i thinking i remember reading this the first time.
its different now. edgier kudos.

update more soon.
i wonder if salem was abused.

Wow. The funny/sick part was that Salem was so nonchalant about the whole thing. And he had the nerve to ask about working on the project! Did he not realize what he did?

Awesome second chapter. I'm wondering how Rain will react to Salem in school. :)

This is so naughty, sudden and completely wrong, but it works on so many levels it's just hard to put into words. I bow to the master. This story has a great set up without information drag and yet I'm intrigued with that little bit of mystery. Keep it going.

Never read the first version but I love this one! Creative and believable!

Wow, I really really love this story. I haven't read the first version but I like how this one is going so far! Can't wait to read more!

I tried reading the original when you first posted and all I can remember of it was being annoyed with that damn apple juice obsession. When I saw this story pop up again I decided to give it another chance and I have to say I’m really enjoying it this time around. Like you said, chapter 2 makes a lot more sense now, but don’t let reviewers tell you Rain’s like a girl for caring about his virginity. Male or female, being raped is traumatic and I think it’s even worse for guys because it’s a loss of control, which they crave more than anything. It’s a direct hit to their sense of masculinity, so I’m curious to see how Rain will bounce back from it and how the characters will end up getting together. As a side note I’m suspending my disbelief over a virgin being able to come out of that without any damage since saliva is NOT a viable lubricant. He definitely would have torn – being tense from the situation, not use to it to begin with, and saliva dries fast especially when being rubbed in. Just saying. I really hope you update soon, I’m desperate for good stories to read!

Yay. I remember the original. I'm sure to enjoy the rewrite, well I am enjoying it. :)

I'm happy to see the story back up. I loved it first time around and I'm sure I'll like the new version!

Really really, like this first chapter, it is so vivid and already has a great story emerging.

Never read your first attempt at this story, therefore not aware of the changes made, but thoroughly enjoying the read so far, and your depiction of school life and its culture.

Feel like I am back at school again!

Hope you continue, and look forward to the next chapter.