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for Cold Lemonade

by SnoChan

person Pisces
schedule September 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very poetically descriptions but the intimate parts could have been described a little longer and a little more vividly. Still, I like your descriptive style!
person Phantom-R
schedule September 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
really enjoyed both hot coffee and cold lemonade. i love how descriptive u r. keep up the great work!