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for The Sacrifices for Peace.

by Charliemonster

person sabaku lotus
schedule January 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Re reading this story. Didn't drop it; I forgot to bookmark it.

I never drop stories unless they are troll fics. Or that bad. I rather enjoy this. I always lose fics though so its sad.
person littlemiss76
schedule November 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is getting better and better. :D
person Anon
schedule October 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I sincerely hope you're not ending it here.>_>
person Carojun
schedule October 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Really hope it turns out good for them. For pointers, maybe add a bit more description about the characters as they do things and interact with each other. I mean, the sex scenes are great but the other interactions seem a bit bare. Also, I'm not sure if I missed it but, what does Jared look like? Please continue, 'cause this is really good and I'd like to see the end.
schedule October 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really good story I will be waiting for more! Good writing, interesting characters as well. Two big thumbs up!
schedule October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Why would she go up to a random stranger on a horse in a city she is unfamiliar with
person sabaku lotus
schedule September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't expecting this chapter. I'm a bit surprised that it turned into a threesome.

Are these two going to handle their marriage by doing kink S and M stuff? Or rough sex? Seriously I can expect it at this point @.@

Or anything; just surprise me as long as it's not scat =_=
person Rammina
schedule September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome!!!! Please write more soon!
person Kay Tee
schedule September 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying your story,I hope you update soon.
person sabaku lotus
schedule September 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
And here comes the drama! I hope there isn't a love triangle that might develop.

Still keep it up! Curious on what you will do next.