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August 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
In response to your A/N review comments, yes I got that Henry would like to be with Mark from the last couple of sentences. I can't remember anything in the first chapter that made me think that Henry wanted Mark. I'll have to go back and re-read it. =)
This lunch date guy seems promising. He sounds like a really nice guy. So Henry has another date at night? Wow, two in one day, lol.
And that cycle thing he was talking about; is that like he would shift or something and attack others, so he has to lock himself in his room so he doesn't hurt anyone?
This lunch date guy seems promising. He sounds like a really nice guy. So Henry has another date at night? Wow, two in one day, lol.
And that cycle thing he was talking about; is that like he would shift or something and attack others, so he has to lock himself in his room so he doesn't hurt anyone?
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August 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, this story is getting more interesting by the chapter!:) yay for mpreg! I'm interested to see if he eventually gets with Mark or this new date guy. I can't wait to find out and I'm intrigued by this cycle he mentioned. Maybe it will be smut time?:)
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August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I enjoyed reading the first chapter and found it very funny and interesting. I am curious to find out more about this world they live in where men can be mates and get pregnant. By the way, I do love Mpreg even though some readers may not and find it very cool. I am in love with Henry's character already and Mark is a blast. Update soon!
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August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i like it! I actually really am a sucker for the best-friends but not lovers type of stories. but you have mpreg in this i see so that's actually make this story all the more interesting. I am really liking your stories so far and I will check out the others. I think this definitely has potential because it is innovative and you have a great voice as a storyteller. can't wait to see more! and thank you for your chapters!
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August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I read this only b/c you wrote it alinna and you're currently one of my favorite writers on here. :) If you hadn't written it, I wouldn't have read it b/c I'm not into mpreg or any other "not normal" issue.
That being said, it was an interesting chapter. Mark is an interesting character. I was wondering why if Mark and Henry are roommates, Mark never saw Henry's tattoo? They don't walk around shirtless? Isn't that odd? For guys I mean.
Ok, so Henry is looking for a guy to breed with so he can get pregnant? How does that work exactly? And this person would be his mate? They couldn't do the normal thing and date, fall in love, etc.? lol
It'll be interesting to find out how these guys get pregnant. lol
That being said, it was an interesting chapter. Mark is an interesting character. I was wondering why if Mark and Henry are roommates, Mark never saw Henry's tattoo? They don't walk around shirtless? Isn't that odd? For guys I mean.
Ok, so Henry is looking for a guy to breed with so he can get pregnant? How does that work exactly? And this person would be his mate? They couldn't do the normal thing and date, fall in love, etc.? lol
It'll be interesting to find out how these guys get pregnant. lol