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oh no.
Maybe paul can give him what he needs,
then he can be with mark?
he loves mark,
and mark loves him.
i dont get this at all.
but maybe.. he cares for paul
and maybe paul will be good for him
i kinda want to be sad now.

My jaw dropped open when Henry said Mark's name. Shit, and Paul STILL wants to be with him! He's so sweet; Henry should never let him go!

So when Henry got sick or nauseas after sex is that like morning sickness, but before he's knocked up?

And I was surprised to read that John's still in the picture. I like John; I just thought that Mark likes to flit from one guy to the next.

I'm really liking this story, the friendship between Henry and Mark is very interesting. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Somehow I had managed to miss previous chapters. So, it was a treat for me! Yee!
Poor little Henry, I can almost feel his yearning for baby and family. Poor guy. Paul seems like a very nice and decent man, let's see how he will develop as this goes on.
And Mark, where to start. He's real contradiction; obviouly a good friend, but also total jerk. But Paul's last comment about Mark being in love with Henry...it dropped my mouth - literally.
Thank you for the update. It's highly appreciated.

Oh yeah, I can see the three of them in a predicament like Ty and Issac. lol Although this predicament has to do with mating and breeding.

So if Mark's parents were men, and there are women in that world, what do the women do? Can they have children also, or is it only the men?

I didn't realize that Mark 'helped out' Henry like that. I didn't think Henry got ANY action. So he'll do everything shy of penetration, right? So he doesn't get Henry pregnant?

Paul is proving to be a nice guy, but I'm still cheering for Mark.
So it wasn't jealousy, it was guilt? It may be guilt that makes him help Hanry through cycles, but it has to be something else that drives him to leave the door open when he has his encounters. Does it mean that Mark wants -to some degree- to sefishly keep Henry by his side, by reviving his friend's feelings from time to time? Well, I'm glad I'm left guessing, it shows the many possibilities of this story, that this story is not predictable enough to guess the plot.
I am actually curious about how you'll resolve Mark's problem.

i wish mark wasn't such a player
and he could just love henry freely
they don't even have to have kids.
just love each other.
and mark could stop messing with other guys.
i want them to be happy ^-^

as usual alinna your awesome

this is really really good. I'm always suspicious of mpreg stories, but I like where this is going. Poor guys

"I'm sorry...You had to hear that. I'm also sorry I had to hear that." That was hysterical! Does Mark have no shame? lol

Paul seems like a really nice guy. How come Henry didn't ask him if he ever mated and has kids?

It may not be a great idea for Mark to be around Paul; with Mark's track record, Paul may be in danger of being attacked. lol

I like this story more and more. It's easy to picture the scene of Harry on the phone and the interaction between the characters is natural.
Now, can jealousy trigger Mark's instincts?! It'll be highly intertaining to see Mark's reaction.
please, update soon.