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by alinnapuomi

person Citizen1
schedule December 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness!! I love this story!! I so was not expecting Paul to act like that! I thought he was a good guy. I cannot wait for the next update! I'm still so shocked, I gotta go clear my head, I have a final later on today ;) Keep up the good work!
schedule September 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE mpreg stories <3 When do you update this one?
person Yohtarama
schedule September 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Omg I love mpreg stories their the best! And I love your writing style! Can't wait to see how it all turns out :)
person Sarkukka
schedule September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Henry, thankfully Mark is there for him. Paul really fooled me. Though he was a great guy...And now he has left Henry hanging there.
schedule September 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe Paul. What a tool. I really liked him. He acted really well; he should win an Oscar.

I still don't understand. If men want to have babies and they want to find a mate, it's really not much different than what society is today with women. I mean, women, gay or straight want to find mates. If they want kids, fine, if not, also fine. But they get to know each other more; their prospective 'mates' or husbands/wives/partners, whatever. We don't just go for the first guy that grabs our fancy, bang him and hope to get knocked up! We don't even know the guy! Why didn't Henry and Paul just date like we do in today's society? Get to know one another first? Use protection. That way when Henry screamed out Mark's name in the middle of his, err, hmmm, you-know-what, his Big O, and Paul gives some excuse and bails, then at least you're not stuck with a baby to raise on your own!

Paul you cad. You never deserved Henry. You don't even deserve Mark, who btw, is turning out to be a really wonderful friend. Henry needs someone now and at least he can count on Mark.

Question: how do the males get pregnant? Do they have eggs or something that fertilizes with sperm? Just curious.
schedule September 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, to be honest I'm glad Paul is out of the way! I always teamed for Mark.
in the end it heppened almost as Jonh had suggested ;)
person eroburn
schedule September 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow just wow..
and oh shit.
poor little henry
he definitely should
have used protection
person Sarkukka
schedule September 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Henry really did it! Jee, well done. Hopefully everything turns out great. Oh, now they're mated...? Paul's real saint. I loved his comment about the wrong name. lol. Thank you so much!!
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Noooo *__* Mark what the hell are you doing??!! Wake up!!
Paul is a gentle soul, but I see him more fit in the role of a friend. So I continue on betting on Mark.
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really liked the chapter. Henry hasn't got it easy with Mark and Paul, and saying Mark's name at the end... Paul wasn't a dick about it though, which surprised me a bit, but it was a nice touch in my opinion.

I live in Norway, have all my life. It's not really cold here, about 10-15 degrees, which is normal for this time of year. I can still wear shorts and t-shirts outside, just for shorter amount of time.