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August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
"They're twins." not "Their twins." Haha, sorry, this kind of grammatic error just irks me! Overall, I really like where the fic is going! :) Especially how you use the names, Castor and Pollox, and that they're opposites of each other, in terms of character, looks and the like (from what little we know of Pollux now)! Update soon!
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August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is a really interesting story! Please continue!
I can't wait to see what happens when they meet. I want to read more.
Great job! Hope you update soon!
I can't wait to see what happens when they meet. I want to read more.
Great job! Hope you update soon!