rate_review Reviews

Your story are interesting ^^d I would like to see this sort of stories but can't find much of them in original fiction. Thanks for the chapter and report Max if you like

I have liked it so far. Kind of sad for the guy to be rejected.
Hope this does not become a rape fic. I really detest them.
Anyways, please update soon :)

heard from a few friends
that they have cameras everywhere now
and if you get accused of rape they investigate it
so I’m just going to assume this is set in the 90's or
less techno age or country.
but that is 2nd hand knowledge,
i doubt that is true of every prison
plus most prisoners get parole
so a sentence of 10 years
could be commuted to 2years or w/e

It always hurts inside when people
think my chars aren't good enough.

I thought i had reviewed this before,
Maybe it ate my review.
I can see this story going a few different ways,
1. Complete smut
2. a well driven plot where main char falls in love
and this is merely the start of a relationship between
Alex and main char
3. a story where bsdm/sex where he's passed around
like a fuck toy and ends up soulless like Chris


whatever the direction this goes in.
i will be watching for updates

I'm.... simply addicted to this story. Looking forward to the next chapter *drools*

i like it!
i don't remember the names and for that i apologise but main guy is hilariously in denial... it seems to me that he absolutely wants to be done by big bad sexy and is just couching his inner desires in "i am gonna fight back and pretend i don't want this" lol
thank you though, for not having the big bad uglies as the other protagonists... as for chris (?) the former (?) bitch... i hope he is okay in this story. he seems like a nice guy. i keep thinking that he is going to get jealous of main guy once big bad sexy makes him his new bitch... then again... maybe he isn't really into it? i just don't know anymore... lol i have been reading yaoi for too long so that now it seems that all guys are gagging for each other...

seriously though, this has such a promising beginning. i am looking forward to the progression of this story!!

It sucks. The main character is stupid, which effects the story greatly. You are far away from a homerun with this crap.

I like it! :D Jason is hot headed, I hope that they won't break him too easily (if they ever will)

I can see that Andrew guy turning up somewhere along the way.

intriguing! Please continue; you are a terrific writer :)

haha and now he dies, and a new inmate comes into the story and gets killed then raped by Alex. Is this a story odf a prison rapist and killer named Alex and his countless victims?
No?
Aaaaaaaaah, too bad cause that would be a new approach.

Anyway I like the fact Alex is violent and our Jason is smart because ppl like that should cause a primary emotion-fear.

I like it - it has a lot of potential, keep up the good work.