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for The Prison Experience

by xoxoxo

person dazedandconfused
schedule August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi, it's just me again lurking around AFF before I go to bed. I noticed that you have warnings up after your story description like this; SLASH – RAPE – LOVE / HATE - Anal. This is just a suggestion and you don't have to do it or anything but I think there are warning codes you can select under your author panel like the ones you have up already but slightly different. For example; m/m, rape, h/c, anal, plus more of them to choose from that fit your story. I just thought it would look better. If you take a peak at other stories listed, you will see what I mean and how they are different. I hope you don't mind me mentioning it and please just consider this contructive criticism. Oh, and by the way, thanks for mentioning Jason has raven hair. Now, I would like to know the color of his eyes, LOL. "Good night"
person Raven
schedule August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i love your story. alex is so confusing but hot! fucking hotas hell. shit i prob would have got on my knees to damn. lol. update soon ok?
person Galina
schedule August 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
LOL, Jason is really naive, isn't he? XD In my opinion he really shouldn't act like that around Alex. And maybe he would be better off with Scar... I mean, between Alex and Scar I can't really choose which one is better... assholes, the both of them. And if Jason wants Alex he will have Chris as his enemy for sure (and I think it would be a mistake to underestimate him; it's so clear that he is jealous and he thinks he loves Alex)

Anyway, update as soon as possible! :D
person miles
schedule August 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far ! But I'm afraid for poor Jason ! ^^'
person SinfulMind
schedule August 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A very promising first two chapters! Can't say much at this stage, but you have my interest. The story has a potential to be really good :)
person dazedandconfused
schedule August 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is the other story I mentioned I was reading that is similar but not quite the same as yours. It's called Prison Bitch by curtainsup and is a WIP with two chapters so far but not updated in months. I thought you might want to check it out. Anyhoo, I am looking foward to reading more of The Prison Experience and finding out what happens to Jason. By the way, can you give a better discription of what he looks like; height, body build, hair/eye color, etc. I will re-read it to see if you already described him but might have missed it. Thanks!
person Tay
schedule August 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon :)
person anonagain
schedule August 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
interesting turn of events! waiting eagerly for the next chappie! and thank you for this amazing story :)
person dazeandconfused
schedule August 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I just wanted to let you know I am enjoying this story. I was reading another one kind of like it but the author seems to have abandoned it. Anyway, you should report that reviewer called Max (he sounds like a flamer) I think there is a link under your author panel where you can click to report them. Or even better just go to the forum and tell a site moderator and they can take care of it for you. After you report them, just delete his review but be sure to let the moderators know first. Anytime you need help with flamers, let them know. They take it very seriously. I hope that Alex helps Jason and that Chris doesn't stay mad at him because he needs a friend. Please update again soon!
person dazedandconfused
schedule August 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi, me again! I just checked and there is a place in the forum to report flamers/trolls, etc. so be sure to report Max!